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打工之七 <<脏口>> <<要情人>>
嘉慕思
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 19:10:38    Post subject: 打工之七 <<脏口>> <<要情人>> Reply with quote

打工之七

1

脏口

操----
刘乙太的口头禅
操这操那

操黄瓜派
操柿子党

操平价超市
操收费公园

操地铁公交的士
操酒吧剧院饭店
操钢筋水泥空心砖
操北海西单东四环

操段老板八辈祖宗

他真是个牲口
过年回家老母问他钱呢
操!

2
要情人

2018年
如果还不能结婚
刘乙太想找个情人

黑道大佬妻妾不能碰
浑球子半斤八两自明
贪官污吏婆姨不想整
小老儿贵贱不侍侯

四十五十可以
只要还有点风韵
寡妇弃妇可以
只要还有点情义
浪女荡女可以
哥们一身力气
穷婆富婆可以
只要有个好脾气

2019年
其中的一个怀了孕
感天谢地
不是乙太的
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 19:31:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

靠!俺喜欢这调调。您将打工系列作个集结到(落尘),让我们学学您如何列出顺序!

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=10958
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嘉慕思
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PostPosted: 2008-01-23 23:00:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

能得到您的肯定真是不易.我的印象您很苛刻并且直率.一向以直言著称.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-24 04:48:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

嘉慕思 wrote:
能得到您的肯定真是不易.我的印象您很苛刻并且直率.一向以直言著称.


唉呀!别哪,我没啥子好著称的!如果你把这里的每一个人的心都剖开
来看,你会发现我最善良!初来乍到,不这么做怕没人理我。您就多担
待!还有,肯定有两种!差别在于由你选择,还是由我选择。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-24 17:27:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错,欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-29 01:05:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評:你很客气; 谢博弈先生欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-29 02:31:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

顶起来看看
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