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朝中措.游玉渊潭冰湖三首
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 06:41:03    Post subject: 朝中措.游玉渊潭冰湖三首 Reply with quote


冰心一片玉湖中,烟色锁朦胧。残月多情垂柳,依稀不胜微风。
凌波漫步,吟诗作曲,我自从容。长笑悲欢看倦,今宵莫问行踪。


童心未许雪心浓,如燕戏长空。手握一分清白,衬它十里梅红。
微澜夕照,还应笑我,往事消融。倦了书生意气,风前剪取花容。


一根钓竿入湖中,静赏晚来风。不问鱼儿几许,只教惬意无穷。
断桥残柳,轻烟夕照,慰我情浓。行乐何须富贵,冰前戏有诗翁。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 07:48:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜读好词,美不胜收.景中寓情,情中有景.

特别喜欢第一首第二首的结句:"长笑悲欢看倦,今宵莫问行踪"

"行乐何需富贵,冰前戏有诗翁"参透人生啊!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 17:45:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏暗香姐的清冷不俗。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 17:57:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

好词好心情。欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2008-02-01 11:31:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢各位老师评阅:)
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