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水调歌头.题黄山云海图(步韵苏轼)
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 06:39:06    Post subject: 水调歌头.题黄山云海图(步韵苏轼) Reply with quote

水调歌头.题黄山云海图(步韵苏轼)

隐约青山秀,雾海绕霞天。一番春色眉妩,自在写流年。几欲登高望远,才羡苍松翠柏,迎客不知寒。更有逐风羽,笑傲在云间。 入古寺 ,听妙韵,未成眠。情长苦短,世事如月怎能圆?惯看花开花落,漫解来兮归去,自古两难全。淡泊明心志,舍得即神仙。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 07:57:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

好词!"淡泊明心志,舍得即神仙"结句潇洒,点睛之笔.欣赏.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 17:41:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

超然。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-28 18:01:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

潇洒写景又写情。“心智”是否“心志”字误?
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PostPosted: 2008-01-29 09:41:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

柔中有刚, 好词!
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