暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-28 06:39:06 Post subject: 水调歌头.题黄山云海图(步韵苏轼) |
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水调歌头.题黄山云海图(步韵苏轼)
隐约青山秀,雾海绕霞天。一番春色眉妩,自在写流年。几欲登高望远,才羡苍松翠柏,迎客不知寒。更有逐风羽,笑傲在云间。 入古寺 ,听妙韵,未成眠。情长苦短,世事如月怎能圆?惯看花开花落,漫解来兮归去,自古两难全。淡泊明心志,舍得即神仙。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~ |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-28 07:57:07 Post subject: |
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好词!"淡泊明心志,舍得即神仙"结句潇洒,点睛之笔.欣赏. _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-28 17:41:03 Post subject: |
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超然。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-28 18:01:38 Post subject: |
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潇洒写景又写情。“心智”是否“心志”字误? |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-29 09:41:48 Post subject: |
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柔中有刚, 好词! |
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