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滴在雪花上的阳光

zhangmin
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Joined: 13 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-24 18:58:47 Post subject: 滴在雪花上的阳光

谁不知道，我跟你一样高贵风来临的时候，又何必哭泣，嫉妒打开古老的门，我与你的历史同样伟大你的诺言，挂在屋檐下温暖着冬花的心情。惹恼的粉蝶脱去外衣，裹起我娇媚的身影拐弯到角落季节不断把诗人崛起，我的脸比雪花还要苍白，眼底的泪躲进暖房，鄙视郊外的烘烤，你只好带走比黄花还要瘦的娇娘中国,江苏,张敏

赵福治
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Joined: 30 May 2006
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Posted: 2008-01-25 00:00:04 Post subject:

你的诺言，挂在屋檐下温暖着冬花的心情。惹恼的粉蝶脱去外衣，裹起我娇媚的身影拐弯到角落 ..................写到人的内心的一首.

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2008-01-25 01:02:34 Post subject:

题目很有诗意,切入角度好~

嘉慕思
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Joined: 12 Jan 2008
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Location: 佳木斯
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Posted: 2008-01-25 01:09:33 Post subject:

娇娘如柳雨是梳虹外斜阳香不住 _________________ 我为自己唱挽歌---文学是个人的选择,不是集体的强加

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-01-26 16:48:07 Post subject:

谢谢赵福治,谢谢半溪明月,谢谢嘉慕思,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-01-27 15:49:15 Post subject:

季节不断把诗人崛起，我的脸比雪花还要苍白.

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-01-27 16:51:03 Post subject:

谢谢赵福治,远握 _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

贝多芬
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Joined: 17 Mar 2007
Posts: 94
Location: 中国上海
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Posted: 2008-01-27 19:08:22 Post subject:

很多时候孤独,让我们变的高贵 _________________ 我是一片沉睡的海渴望苏醒的日子不会到来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1259454194

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-01-31 20:56:26 Post subject:

谢谢贝多芬,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2008-02-02 02:10:36 Post subject:

美丽的你 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-02-02 19:15:50 Post subject:

谢谢金金,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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