zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-24 18:58:47 Post subject: 滴在雪花上的阳光 |
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谁不知道,我跟你一样高贵
风来临的时候,又何必
哭泣,嫉妒
打开古老的门,我与你的历史
同样伟大
你的诺言,挂在屋檐下
温暖着冬花的心情。惹恼的粉蝶
脱去外衣,裹起我娇媚的身影
拐弯到角落
季节不断把诗人崛起,我的脸
比雪花还要苍白,眼底的泪
躲进暖房,鄙视
郊外的烘烤,你只好带走
比黄花还要瘦的娇娘
中国,江苏,张敏 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-25 00:00:04 Post subject: |
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你的诺言,挂在屋檐下
温暖着冬花的心情。惹恼的粉蝶
脱去外衣,裹起我娇媚的身影
拐弯到角落
..................写到人的内心的一首. |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-25 01:02:34 Post subject: |
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题目很有诗意,切入角度好~ |
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嘉慕思 童生
Joined: 12 Jan 2008 Posts: 78 Location: 佳木斯 嘉慕思Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-25 01:09:33 Post subject: |
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娇娘如柳雨是梳
虹外斜阳香不住 _________________ 我为自己唱挽歌---文学是个人的选择,不是集体的强加 |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-26 16:48:07 Post subject: |
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谢谢赵福治,谢谢半溪明月,谢谢嘉慕思,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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赵福治 探花

Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 3456 Location: 中国北京 赵福治Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-27 15:49:15 Post subject: |
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季节不断把诗人崛起,我的脸
比雪花还要苍白. |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-27 16:51:03 Post subject: |
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谢谢赵福治,远握  _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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贝多芬 童生

Joined: 17 Mar 2007 Posts: 94 Location: 中国上海 贝多芬Collection |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-31 20:56:26 Post subject: |
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谢谢贝多芬,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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金金 进士出身

Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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zhangmin 秀才

Joined: 13 Mar 2007 Posts: 450 Location: 中国.江苏.张家港 zhangminCollection |
Posted: 2008-02-02 19:15:50 Post subject: |
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谢谢金金,远握. _________________ 风走过,灯灭了,黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。 |
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