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贴一组问好赵兄等诗友:《与你共餐》(组诗)
刺桐飞花
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PostPosted: 2008-01-24 22:01:18    Post subject: 贴一组问好赵兄等诗友:《与你共餐》(组诗) Reply with quote

刺桐飞花:《与你共餐》(组诗)

◎《皮 蛋 粥》

从未如此仔细地煮过一碗粥
这个过程已然超过了粥本身
小心淘米,清煮皮蛋,然后
拨壳切丁。这些都要有足够的

爱心。为了使粥更加美味,我
用十二分的专注切下细细姜丝
多么美妙,它最后的味道就像
我们的生活,而我管它叫爱情

熬好了这碗粥,我细心打盛
我一定要在它冷却之前,端到
你面前,并且微笑着看你喝光
这就是我想做的,淡淡的关怀

◎《大骨汤》

听说大骨汤富含钙质成份,姑娘
从生鲜超市挑来了两根
一根炖给了天,一根炖给了我

天望着大骨开始忧郁起来
这么壮的骨,如果安在我身
世界该不会有这么多的暗吧

我呷了口姑娘煲的汤
倾刻浑身燥热。无数的热
暖成了一滴泪,在眼眶里打转

这根没有来历的骨,是姑娘
怎么爱也爱不完的情
流在我的骨髓里,不断的激荡
又不断的激扬

◎《生活啊你可真有意思》

去了趟超市
不经易买了条红萝卜
本来我是要与家里的黄瓜粉丝一起凉拌三丝
但当我托起了你——亲爱的萝卜
我确信这模样儿是多么像我小巧的姑娘
顺手捻起雕刀
为了这副容颜,我已默琢多年
美丽的红萝卜,妙不可言的缘
生活啊,我突然发现你真是太有意思了

◎《与你共餐》

与你共餐是件很美的事
两菜一汤,简单而富足

先来个拍黄瓜吧,据说可以减肥也可美容
而美观酸甜的咕噜肉又是爱情的绝佳佐品

与你一起,吃饭不再是纯粹的机械运动
先喝汤还是先入饭,我要绅士般思考

我不会告诉你今天我要吃几碗,这个问题
我要请你反复的猜,但最后没有一个答案正确

我完全不必担心你会为此发火。你闪亮的眼珠儿
已在微微打转,而那分明是一种安详

而你放心,我最后一定会把桌面的食物一扫而光
孩子还未出生,我要养成做为父亲的榜样

◎《嫁给我吧,我请你吃一辈子的》

这颗米,我打上辈子就种下
每天,我在稻田里浇水除草
呵护它,就像呵护我的未来

后来,她慢慢开始发芽成长
我也成为名符其实的庄稼汉
一天天的,我们的关系亲密了

我相信这不是一个虚无的梦
因为我看见她的嘴角正咧起
而她淘气的模样多么像个孩子

这颗米,她就是我的一辈子
她饱满的青春多么令人着迷
在她面前,我又是这样的虔诚

如果你也爱我,请你嫁给我吧
我会请你吃一生里都可口的饭
这颗米,这辈子,还有我这人
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PostPosted: 2008-01-24 22:42:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好,很随和!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-24 22:43:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

好诗 欣赏.
细腻而不琐碎
娓娓而不唠叨

有生活有情境有美感.

愿学习.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-24 23:58:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

熬好了这碗粥,我细心打盛
我一定要在它冷却之前,端到
你面前,并且微笑着看你喝光
这就是我想做的,淡淡的关怀....................生活的诗意.细腻而深刻.提.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 01:13:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗意地生活~欣赏!
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刺桐飞花
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 19:31:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

李有明 wrote:
问好,很随和!


谢谢有明兄.在这也遇上你了,网络真小.Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 19:32:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

嘉慕思 wrote:
好诗 欣赏.
细腻而不琐碎
娓娓而不唠叨

有生活有情境有美感.

愿学习.


感谢鼓励.问好你.新年好!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 19:32:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

赵福治 wrote:
熬好了这碗粥,我细心打盛
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问好赵兄.辛苦了!新年好!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 19:33:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
诗意地生活~欣赏!


谢谢明月欣赏.问好.多批评.新年好!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-25 20:57:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

顺手捻起雕刀
为了这副容颜,我已默琢多年
--------呵呵
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