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消魂青波－－Cancun（墨西哥）一游

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-14 08:58:25 Post subject: 消魂青波－－Cancun（墨西哥）一游

忆得莺春归忘反，亭峦又是六出时。消魂仍在青波里，不惹氤氲怎自持？刚从墨西哥Cancun回来，那儿冬季如春，人文、自然景观诗画一般，使人流连忘返。

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-14 17:28:02 Post subject:

如游其景。

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-14 18:20:42 Post subject:

如诗如画. 相信你还得接着写

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Posted: 2008-01-14 21:20:42 Post subject: Re: 消魂青波－－Cancun（墨西哥）一游

人已返回，“消魂仍在青波里”，的确令人难以忘怀。愿冰清老师快乐多多！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-15 06:30:05 Post subject:

墨国归来,诗情满怀.问好冰清老师. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

孙继廷
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Posted: 2008-01-16 01:37:33 Post subject:

你好.多日不见.回家`过年吗

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-17 11:07:55 Post subject:

谢楼上几位朋友鼓励!

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-17 11:22:01 Post subject:

有朋友提出"不惹氤氲怎自持?"句费解,我也自知其跳跃性大了些.为了弥补绝句形式表达的局限,我将它蕴含的故事和体会,用随笔作些注释.请大家看看:http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=10806 恳请批评指正.

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-17 11:27:55 Post subject:

继廷学长, 我今年无法回国.虽然我年年都想回国与亲朋团聚.

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-17 11:32:57 Post subject: 墨西哥Cancun游--消魂青波

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如诗如画.
相信你还得接着写

白水,你鼓励,容我再打油.

消魂青波（2）

听得涛声震吼来，
一头扑落任惊怀。
玉山纵捣千堆雪，
瀖濩又从浪里回。

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Posted: 2008-01-18 21:45:45 Post subject: Re: 消魂青波－－Cancun（墨西哥）一游

冰清 wrote:

忆得莺春归忘反，亭峦又是六出时。
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冰清老师，好诗，只有到过Cancun的人才能体味到大作的意境。我早前也到过该地，也照了不少照片，下面是在“多伦多文化艺术沙龙”选登我的8张照片，读者看了或者对您的诗作有更充分的理解。

http://www.artssalon.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=978&postdays=0&postorder=asc&start=15

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-25 11:25:52 Post subject:

秋斑, 您贴在“多伦多文化艺术沙龙”的照片, 我看了还想看. 难得像您一样有如此好的技艺和雅兴! 墨西哥湾的浪美极. 我们也拍了不少, 容后贴几张共享吧.

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Posted: 2008-01-25 16:09:00 Post subject:

wow, 太好了。我四月初去cancun. 有两个地方，选了cancun, 看到诗和评，彻底不后悔了，哈哈。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-26 21:25:28 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

wow, 太好了。我四月初去cancun.
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太好了,nobody!
四月初去cancun, 可能气温高了一点.
最好避开它的雨季.

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Posted: 2008-01-27 01:45:35 Post subject:

消魂仍在青波里，不惹氤氲怎自持？问好～～ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

不亦悦乎
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Posted: 2008-01-27 07:41:35 Post subject:

好诗！特别喜欢“消魂仍在青波里”。

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Posted: 2008-01-27 07:47:31 Post subject: Re: 消魂青波－－Cancun（墨西哥）一游

秋叶 wrote:

冰清 wrote:

忆得莺春归忘反，亭峦又是六出时。
...

冰清老师，好诗，只有到过Cancun的人才能体味到大作的意境。我早前也到过该地，也照了不少照片，下面是在“多伦多文化艺术沙龙”选登我的8张照片，读者看了或者对您的诗作有更充分的理解。
...

很喜欢这几张照片……，多才多艺的版主。
那楼台是古玛雅人建造的么？

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-29 09:16:03 Post subject:

谢达夫和不亦悦乎! 秋斑贴图上有堪称世界七大奇迹之一的玛雅文化遗址Chichen Itza的玛雅金字塔。

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-29 11:27:50 Post subject:

第二张照片从我们动态的录像中取出,所以不清晰.

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