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《见证》
风动松柏
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PostPosted: 2007-01-02 08:43:50    Post subject: 《见证》 Reply with quote

《见证》

高傲的请你飞翔,高尚的请你仰视
因爱所以有所不爱,要自由因为有所不自由
看吧,天空飞翔的是什么
鸣叫扑楞的麻雀,展翅降落的孔雀
我已经忘记了我是什么。

风暴不止一次来临!
那是什么!总有一些会死亡!
那是什么!总会有一些落荒而逃!
什么被封锁,什么被摁紧了嘴巴!

遍地的不止是黄花,响往还有雪山开的莲!
原始森林的云迎面而来,不胜寒的窝!

我要奔跑,四蹄腾跃,草原上的马!
我要撒野,离开沉重的厄,道路上的牛!
我不能只听一声号令,一名战士!
我不但听到一种声音,天上雷霆!

这是生存,这是生活,这是起舞
从洞穴到屋子,从火龙到良禽
从森林到山野,从一个盘上到遍地的绿
哪里没有野兽和人类的足迹!
风暴前后的麻雀,在白玉兰树上叫得死去活来。

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PostPosted: 2007-01-02 17:41:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

一种直抒的写法。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-02 17:59:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

力量的节节上生

风暴前后的麻雀,在白玉兰树上叫得死去活来。
这样的语言, 很形象化的
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PostPosted: 2007-01-02 19:53:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

直抒心意.
欢迎新朋友
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PostPosted: 2007-01-05 19:36:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位的评阅.
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