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詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-24 17:25:09 Post subject:

呀！谢谢扭吧弟，一大篇哪！很清楚了。半中性的词汇，有些揶揄的味道。你用了英文，挺小资啊！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-01-24 17:39:21 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

呀！谢谢扭吧弟，一大篇哪！很清楚了。半中性的词汇，有些揶揄的味道。你用了英文，挺小资啊！

DD悟性真好~~

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Posted: 2008-01-24 17:56:01 Post subject: Re: 泛滥

悠子 wrote:

城市的水泥，迷失
雨的缠绵，素描水色浪漫
霓虹痴情收集的灿烂
从身边经过，温柔梦幻

枕抱星疏的夜，满绪
寄一道温柔给那片暗蓝
笑意彩蝶般，轻落心坎
任凭，你的影子泛滥

不知所云，但很美，也就够了。 Smile

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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:07:02 Post subject:

想批两句，没找到由头。只好说说风格的话。一个人写诗，如果形不成自己的风格，则很难被称为诗人；但如果风格一直固定，单个看也许还可以，放到一起看，未免有重复之嫌。重复自己也是重复啊。所以要变，又不能全变，保留一部分改革一部分，这里面的分寸，太难把握了啊 _________________ 地址: 054001 河北省邢台市天一城8-1-703 　苏晓东。博客：http://blog.sina.com.cn/a10z90

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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:25:09 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

呀！谢谢扭吧弟，一大篇哪！很清楚了。半中性的词汇，有些揶揄的味道。你用了英文，挺小资啊！

哈，当时在办公室，敲不了中文。
其实觉得小资一般用来形容女士。是一个较强烈褒义词。
小资体的诗歌，你不能指望它忧国忧民，关怀弱势群体，指点人类前程等等，它也得不了诺贝尔奖。但是，它唤醒你secular生活一些富有格调的诱人的经验，情怀，感念。

于凉夏黄昏林边湖畔的躺椅上，啜一口红酒，读一首悠子，很小资 Laughing

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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:26:01 Post subject:

奥冬 wrote:

想批两句，没找到由头。只好说说风格的话。
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您说尽了都！这些话俺不敢当着面说，只敢私底下聊聊！特胆小～
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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:36:00 Post subject: Re: 泛滥

博弈 wrote:

不知所云，但很美，也就够了。 Smile

把最后一行改那么大，象是在替我改诗呢。不知所云，还美？呵呵，莫名其妙美~~

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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:37:36 Post subject:

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quote]哈，当时在办公室，敲不了中文。
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NN也很小资呀

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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:43:20 Post subject:

奥冬 wrote:

想批两句，没找到由头。只好说说风格的话。
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您说的对。
我哪里算诗人么，到诗盗这里来捣乱的。 Embarassed

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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:54:27 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

奥冬 wrote:

想批两句，没找到由头。只好说说风格的话。
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您说的对。
...

呵呵，酸呢！猜奥冬行为模式与我相仿，你不顶他两句，他反而懒得理你！又及，这故意的吧？
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Posted: 2008-01-24 19:58:56 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

诗盗喜裸评 wrote:

呀！谢谢扭吧弟，一大篇哪！很清楚了。半中性的词汇，有些揶揄的味道。你用了英文，挺小资啊！

哈，当时在办公室，敲不了中文。
...

美呆了！别把红酒洒翻在笔电上头，那就不小资，要砸大钱！
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Posted: 2008-01-24 21:15:11 Post subject:

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呵呵，酸呢！猜奥冬行为模式与我相仿，你不顶他两句，他反而懒得理你！又及，这故意的吧？

没酸。没故意。

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Posted: 2008-01-24 22:34:26 Post subject: Re: 泛滥

悠子 wrote:

博弈 wrote:

不知所云，但很美，也就够了。 Smile

把最后一行改那么大，象是在替我改诗呢。不知所云，还美？呵呵，莫名其妙美~~

不敢改，放大表示喜欢。让我看不懂，又没法挑坏，那就是好喽。
真要散焦，去中央主题意识的诗，是一种后现代的写法，也很好的。
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Posted: 2008-01-25 08:51:49 Post subject: Re: 泛滥

博弈 wrote:

不敢改，放大表示喜欢。让我看不懂，又没法挑坏，那就是好喽。...

让你看不懂，又没法挑坏。。。呵呵，我就朝这个方向发展吧 Smile

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