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荒沙夜曲之<碎玉>

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Posted: 2006-12-31 08:45:37 Post subject: 荒沙夜曲之<碎玉>

荒沙夜曲之<碎玉> 这是一潭秋水? 是的这是通宵不眠的眼睛流出来的干涩曾几何时, 红以它的抑郁沉淀. 一片秋天的叶子在心中的烙痕喜欢听它脉络的流动, 比如说雨, 比如说海浪, 比如说岩石的融捧起, 如一轮朝阳的胚胎或一枚未名的星你用灼伤的双手捧起如同捧着一双红色的眼睛可是, 当一把沙土从指缝流出玛瑙的粉末, 你开始学会放弃 . . . . . .

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Posted: 2006-12-31 15:57:58 Post subject:

力量的流动好美的月型沙丘 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2006-12-31 20:15:56 Post subject:

无图可看，遗憾。不过，诗依然优美。 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-01-01 11:58:06 Post subject:

白水　诗歌文字　和形象处理　都进步了　 . . _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:20:51 Post subject:

和平岛 wrote:

力量的流动
好美的月型沙丘

谢谢岛斑.

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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:23:50 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

无图可看，遗憾。不过，诗依然优美。

谢谢司马. 但愿你现在能看见图了, 很美的.
不过这图只是配来好玩. 这组诗歌本无需图.

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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:25:14 Post subject:

kokho wrote:

白水　诗歌文字　和形象处理　都进步了　

Cool

.

.

好漂亮的画, 等你配诗. Wink

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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:32:00 Post subject:

这幅画震撼的美 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-01-02 20:37:07 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

这幅画
震撼的美

是吗? 有这种感觉时定有诗歌流出. 等大作. Smile

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