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无题-五律
公子郭
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PostPosted: 2008-01-23 17:47:54    Post subject: 无题-五律 Reply with quote
无 题
诸记聚会命题

盛世绝经纶，文人岂自哀。
生平随寂寞，死后伴尘埃。
素有凌云志，同怀宇宙才。
须持项羽剑，遥指霸王台。
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2008-01-23 18:06:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
这首无 题，壮志拿云！欣赏~
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qinghongh
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PostPosted: 2008-01-23 18:15:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
郭兄口气不小！
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公子郭
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PostPosted: 2008-01-23 18:32:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
郭兄口气不小！


只是郭某在聚会的感言，到没有什么很大的口气。
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冰清
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Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-01-29 11:20:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
粗犷, 豪迈!

此诗属"五律仄起首句不入韵”式. 若按其首联出句不入韵一格, 首联出句必须仄收.
"纶", <词林正韵>为第六部 平声"十一真" .
建议改改!
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不亦悦乎
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PostPosted: 2008-01-29 14:35:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
挺豪迈的。
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