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正在融化的冰柱
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PostPosted: 2006-12-30 21:48:08    Post subject: 正在融化的冰柱 Reply with quote

正在融化的冰柱

————司马策风


滴落——
从佛的手指
是激烈的敲响
还是一串温柔的耳语

风,默数着佛珠
每一颗载有不同的旨意
你是流星雨的坠落
我却等过了一个世纪

等你 穿越红尘万里
等你 把雪封的羞涩抹去
从第一圈涟漪
直透——心底

等你,等你轻扣深潭
共吟幽谷丁冬的诗句
能否从春波初涌 直到
冰封轮回,雪飘叹息


2006,3,2

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PostPosted: 2006-12-30 22:21:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

风, 默 数 着 佛 珠

这个意象很奇特
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PostPosted: 2006-12-31 09:00:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

又是冰封雪冻时, 静侯佛珠润新诗
新年好
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PostPosted: 2006-12-31 20:25:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢岛主光临点评。

新年好
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PostPosted: 2007-01-01 11:53:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读 问好 新年快乐 ;)


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PostPosted: 2007-01-03 08:09:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

风, 默 数 着 佛 珠

每 一 颗 载 有 不 同 的 旨 意

你 是 流 星 雨 的 坠 落 ...

remind me what I wrote many years ago (teenager at the time, naive, be patient, thanks)

夜半小亭

我独坐在湖心小亭
默数着夜空深处的星点
月弯在脚下徐徐转行
仿佛是一只寂寞的小船

睁开眼睛是满天繁星
闭上眼睛是一心悠然
泡沫搓响着水中的青影
象在涤洗一领破旧的衣衫

颊上飘落杨花的雪
向我谎道着天上的消息
四周颤响的是籁籁的树叶
宛然有人在暗处拨弄着念珠

仿佛一个摇篮里眠熟的孩婴
我均匀地呼吸着,在这阒寂的夜半
时而回忆,时而轻轻地憧憬
心灵静谧,如同一片美丽的墓园——

园中小屋里,有一位忠实的守墓人
对着丘冢,他正在细数自己的财富——
有的已经葬下,多如这夜空的星辰
有些正在赶来,哼唱着轻快的谣曲......

月弯在脚下徐徐转行
仿佛是一只寂寞的小船
请问你从遥远的何方起程
哪里才是你泊靠的港湾

我是一个小小的夜
偎在这无边黑暗的怀里
如同在这宇宙间无声的对谈里
我是一句短短的话语

忽然一颗流星向着天边坠落
四无人声里,它可是专为我而至?
它一定有意告诉我什么
只是没有来得及说出!

对着这苍茫夜空,我深深地点点头
轻声说一句谢谢,禁不住泪流满面
一阵微风,传来远处神秘的幽香
一棵菩提树无语伫立,在岸的那边
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PostPosted: 2007-01-03 08:34:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good morning simplysimple,
when we started to write poems, we wrote in a more natural way:
minds without the complication of poetry.

It is a lovely poem
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-03 21:23:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢simplysimple阅读,再谢你贴上你的抒情诗。

司马问好
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PostPosted: 2007-09-06 21:58:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
又是冰封雪冻时, 静侯佛珠润新诗
新年好


给白水送上迟到的感谢和问候。
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