张世明 童生
Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 78
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Posted: 2008-01-20 03:03:44 Post subject: 《寒风吹》 |
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《寒风吹》
刀刮脸的风
你能不能轻些
再轻些
尽管春天已经不远
你可不可以
预支我一丝温暖
在一条路上
流浪多年
现在只剩下皮包骨
一根牙签
轻轻地
便足以将我掏空 |
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白水 大学士
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-20 18:13:42 Post subject: |
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祝福诗人. 春天就会来了 |
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kino 秀才
Joined: 23 Dec 2006 Posts: 411 Location: beijing kinoCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-20 23:15:58 Post subject: |
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别让她自己挤,拿板砖儿拍~~~
眼睛受不了了,先到这儿了。下面的以后再看了 |
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张世明 童生
Joined: 30 May 2006 Posts: 78
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Posted: 2008-01-20 23:28:35 Post subject: |
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感谢二位阅读指正.问好/ |
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