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题白水题头照

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-18 08:36:05 Post subject: 题白水题头照

白水兄的题头照,呈现出水朦胧影朦胧的景象,给人许多想象空间.凑打油一首,瞎猜一回,如有不当,请白兄见谅. 晨雾轻纱透碧霜伊人独立水一方归帆不见烟波渺为赋离愁醉小觞 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-18 12:15:47 Post subject:

谢谢黄老师,收藏了.

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-01-18 17:11:47 Post subject:

有位佳人，在水一方。

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-18 21:21:20 Post subject:

晨雾轻纱透碧霜伊人独立水一方归帆不见烟波渺为赋离愁醉小觞黄老师，写出了照片中的意境，也写出了照片中的内涵。我记得白水兄还有一照片，照的时候是对着人，可是照出来只看到一只手，如果贴出来，一定也是个好的题材。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-19 08:31:28 Post subject:

谢谢秋叶点评,问好. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

不亦悦乎
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Posted: 2008-01-27 08:36:10 Post subject: Re: 题白水题头照

黄洋界 wrote:

晨雾轻纱透碧霜
伊人独立水一方
归帆不见烟波渺
为赋离愁醉小觞

喜欢后两句，清而雅。

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-27 11:55:15 Post subject:

黄兄好诗! 意境朦胧静谧, 美不胜收. 白水信意! 水迹心影,一片浓情.

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-27 18:01:25 Post subject:

谢谢不亦君冰清老师赏评.问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2008-01-27 19:57:42 Post subject:

好意境．老师出手不凡．学习。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-28 06:38:10 Post subject:

暗香过誉了,我倒要向您学习才是,问好. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

郑达夫
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Posted: 2008-01-28 19:54:45 Post subject:

欣赏学习～～问好黄老师～～ _________________ 我的新浪博客： http://blog.sina.com.cn/zdf595 我的QQ： 450895168 我的地址：福建永春仙夾園德樓（362604）鄭逹夫

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