悠子
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Joined: 04 Jan 2008
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Location: US
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 Posted: 2008-01-17 08:50:25 Post subject: 夜○思 |
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夜○思
树叶流淌着月光
花瓣一样的心事， 掠过枝头
打开忽明忽暗的忧伤
隐约的歌谣，纷乱着心情
思绪，在发丝里跋涉
我的空旷擦不去你的温暖
夜，凝固成等待的姿势
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刘雨萍
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Joined: 25 Jan 2007
Posts: 226
Location: Houston, TX. U.S.A
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| Posted: 2008-01-17 09:36:08 Post subject: |
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喜欢你的这些短诗，句句典雅，排在一起就浓的化不开了。还有这些配图 
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moonlight
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Joined: 25 Dec 2006
Posts: 31
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2008-01-17 12:14:53 Post subject: |
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思绪，在发丝里跋涉
我的空旷擦不去你
结于此, 似也不错 |
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半溪明月
榜眼
Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760
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| Posted: 2008-01-17 23:10:06 Post subject: |
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| 婉约,凝练~不错! |
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curiousfish
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Joined: 06 Jan 2008
Posts: 2
Location: Los Angeles and Hangzhou
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| Posted: 2008-01-18 00:18:07 Post subject: |
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| 凝固成等待的姿势 |
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悠子
举人
Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
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| Posted: 2008-01-18 12:23:48 Post subject: |
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思绪，在发丝里跋涉
我的空旷擦不去你
结于此, 似也不错 |
嗯， 也是。 谢班班。 |
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