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【蝴蝶正在路上】
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 07:22:10    Post subject: 【蝴蝶正在路上】 Reply with quote
【蝴蝶正在路上】


一只蝴蝶像一片雪花
飞，从北往南
天空打开秘密通道
丝绢的薄翼带着你的体温和笔迹
赶赴一场生日帕迪和盛宴

红酒斟满，眉儿画好
小人儿擎起烛台
蝴蝶栖上发梢。虚拟一把椅子呵
牙齿嚼出它的烟草味，流泪
对着月亮喊：干杯
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 08:46:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
“蝴蝶正在路上”

这个标题做的好。一个过程。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 08:52:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
巧。 问好月月
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 12:15:41    Post subject: Reply with quote
轻灵
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 15:18:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
天空打开秘密通道
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 17:41:49    Post subject: Reply with quote
刘雨萍 wrote:
“蝴蝶正在路上”

这个标题做的好。一个过程。

问好雨萍~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 17:42:53    Post subject: Reply with quote
悠子 wrote:
巧。 问好月月

谢谢悠悠~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 19:33:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
。虚拟一把椅子呵
牙齿嚼出它的烟草味，流泪
对着月亮喊：干杯
....标题醒目,内文也不错。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 22:07:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
moonlight wrote:
轻灵


谢月光点评~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 22:09:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
nobody wrote:
天空打开秘密通道

应该是便捷通道~呵呵，问好NY!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 22:14:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
赵福治 wrote:
。虚拟一把椅子呵
...


谢赵老师点评~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 22:14:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
生日帕迪? Smile
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 22:25:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
呵呵，没有啦,虚构~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 22:32:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
原来是给自己生日啊。
清晨为你放飞的UFO, 请注意查收。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 22:43:11    Post subject: Reply with quote
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原来是给自己生日啊。
清晨为你放飞的UFO, 请注意查收。 Laughing


收到了，我写了点东西，给你发射回去了，记得查收~
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PostPosted: 2008-01-18 00:49:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
好题目 文采多多.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-18 01:03:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
嘉慕思 wrote:
好题目 文采多多.


谢谢嘉慕思,迎宾厅有你的欢迎帖子，去看看~ Smile
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