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请回头看一眼, 我渴

moonlight
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Posted: 2008-01-17 12:23:57 Post subject: 请回头看一眼, 我渴

请回头看一眼, 我渴 ___临屏随笔, 致热爱诗歌的人们朋友, 请听我说我是诗坛一株迟开的花朵在园丁繁忙的日子请你抖落芬芳的晨露润湿我吟诗的唇我渴朋友, 请听我说我不是雍容华贵的牡丹也不是圣洁的百合我只是诗坛一棵扶绿的小草请你洒下过云的雨滴润湿我风中的思绪我渴朋友, 请听我说我不是鄱阳湖畔的斑竹赚不来你的千滴泪水却盼望你驻足看一眼刚刚出土的幼苗让我浸入你潮湿的目光我渴朋友请不要问我是谁或许只是一眼干涸的井或许只是行将远去的云朵或许 "我"谁也不是这个美丽的花园我们曾经来过

刘雨萍
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Posted: 2008-01-17 13:26:51 Post subject:

这个渴望甘露的诗人，笔头就是快，随时都可以“临屏随笔”。佩服。 _________________ 隔海抒情

moonlight
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Posted: 2008-01-17 15:51:11 Post subject:

所谓己所欲, 施与人吧. 谁加的音乐在我的帖字里, 很喜欢. 而且每打开一次都有不同的音乐

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-17 17:40:47 Post subject:

同感,问好月光~

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-17 20:53:15 Post subject:

愿多一点人同感

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Posted: 2008-01-17 21:18:56 Post subject:

moonlight wrote:

所谓己所欲, 施与人吧.
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好听啊。每次不同吗？那我得多来看看。 Laughing

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白水
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Posted: 2008-01-17 21:25:35 Post subject:

知道吗, 这歌是自己飞进来的. 也不知道哪位斑斑贴的

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Posted: 2008-01-17 21:28:42 Post subject:

估计是雨萍，因为我很早就打开此贴，很慢，打不开，已经在那里了。要不就是和平老头。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-01-17 21:35:25 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

估计是雨萍，因为我很早就打开此贴，很慢，打不开，已经在那里了。要不就是和平老头。

PEACE什么时候成老头了 Very Happy

ANYWAY, 方便我听歌就行 Razz

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Posted: 2008-01-19 19:55:18 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

愿多一点人同感

同感，同感，同感，同感
同感，同感，同感，同感
同感，同感，同感，同感
同感，同感，同感，同感
Very Happy

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-20 18:23:18 Post subject:

哈, 风动. 是说今天TORONTO怎么突然降温了呢, 总算找到冬天的感觉了. 原来是你回来了. 真高兴

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Posted: 2008-01-20 20:07:01 Post subject:

如此放低自己，如此对诗歌敬爱，我们何愁文学大家不会出世？ _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-01-20 20:12:09 Post subject:

我曾经与和平岛兄谈起论坛，说我们论坛能出现明星似的人物，能产生一批恒星，那我们论坛将功不可没，即便站长及诸位版主再辛苦一些，我们也高兴不过。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-01-20 23:11:42 Post subject:

期盼着呢~~

杯中冲浪 wrote:

我曾经与和平岛兄谈起论坛，说我们论坛能出现明星似的人物，能产生一批恒星，那我们论坛将功不可没，即便站长及诸位版主再辛苦一些，我们也高兴不过。

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Posted: 2008-01-21 21:36:19 Post subject:

真是有希望的一代。。。我也渴了，咋办？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2008-01-22 22:04:13 Post subject:

kino wrote:

期盼着呢~~

杯中冲浪 wrote:

同感.问好

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-22 22:10:56 Post subject:

红袖添乱 wrote:

真是有希望的一代。。。

我也渴了，咋办？

多喝水, 多浇水

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Posted: 2008-01-23 03:33:48 Post subject:

这个美丽的花园我曾经来过

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-26 21:18:03 Post subject:

谢谢荷梦. 在这个花园, 你是一朵美丽的荷

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