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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 18:07:52    Post subject: 钻石 Reply with quote

你送我一枚钻石
(我送你一枚钻石)
一枚硕大的,地球上找不到的钻石
却象征着永久的离弃

钻石突然之间,莫名地伤感起来
虽然,也许你(我)那个星球上
原来就是这样的,原来就是
用这样的方式,讲述

不要这样,如果这样
你(我),请到你们(我们)的星球

啥么呀!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 18:10:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

砍砍. ()看起来有点不顺 Razz
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 18:13:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

还没写(注)呢
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 18:16:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

砍什么?他还没开刷哪!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 18:41:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

嘿嘿!石头好。。。。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 18:54:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

苏茉儿 wrote:
嘿嘿!石头好。。。。


。。。。。萤石?大国手!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 20:13:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
。。。。。萤石?大国手!

像大国手写的么?你要是没被晕倒就使劲坎!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 20:41:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
。。。。。萤石?大国手!

像大国手写的么?你要是没被晕倒就使劲坎!


萤石是中医师(大概)先看看再考虑砍砍!一般男人喜欢用抓的,像猫!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 20:46:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

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萤石是中医师(大概)先看看再考虑砍砍!一般男人喜欢用抓的,像猫!


就是, 这钻石就像是乱抓来的, 要不要无所谓, 外星的。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 21:45:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

悠子 wrote:
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
萤石是中医师(大概)先看看再考虑砍砍!一般男人喜欢用抓的,像猫!


就是, 这钻石就像是乱抓来的, 要不要无所谓, 外星的。
我觉得不像大国手写的
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 21:48:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

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我觉得不像大国手写的

是外星人的手
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PostPosted: 2008-01-17 21:50:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

啥么 wrote:
悠子 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
萤石是中医师(大概)先看看再考虑砍砍!一般男人喜欢用抓的,像猫!


就是, 这钻石就像是乱抓来的, 要不要无所谓, 外星的。
我觉得不像大国手写的


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什么大哥!您大大的好!方才多有失里,您且大肚能容,切勿与小人一般见识!谢谢!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-18 06:58:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

钻石最重要的就是cut.
这一颗根本是啥么石头東西, 丢了都行,不值一砍. Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-01-20 18:17:34    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
钻石最重要的就是cut.
这一颗根本是啥么石头东西, 丢了都行,不值一砍. Laughing


这是个问题。钻石用什么去切割?现在听说用水刀,以前呢?
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 08:17:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
钻石最重要的就是cut.
这一颗根本是啥么石头東西, 丢了都行,不值一砍. Laughing


哈哈~~

有一斗的。。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 08:22:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

红袖添乱 wrote:
博弈 wrote:
钻石最重要的就是cut.
这一颗根本是啥么石头东西, 丢了都行,不值一砍. Laughing


哈哈~~

有一斗的。。


相信我,他俩斗不起来!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 08:26:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

嗯,得找个人来斗,不斗不好玩
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 08:32:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

红袖添乱 wrote:
嗯,得找个人来斗,不斗不好玩


哈!你只想看着有人斗吧?没觉着你好斗过!
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 08:38:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

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红袖添乱 wrote:
嗯,得找个人来斗,不斗不好玩


哈!你只想看着有人斗吧?没觉着你好斗过!


约是用来违的
手机是用来关的
电话是用来不接的
我,是用来不斗的。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-21 23:11:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

唯恐不乱
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