妖刀 童生
Joined: 17 Jan 2008 Posts: 17
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Posted: 2008-01-17 16:59:29 Post subject: 新来,向大家问好 |
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新来贵地,未有新作,贴些月前的文章,大家多多指教
五言
早觉
晓肌凉似雪,晨雾淡如烟。
揉眼思新梦,今天还昨天?
晚出
近晚出高楼,榕荫欲掩秋。
扬衣身骤暖,沿水岸空幽。
车路难新句,霞灯问旧愁。
寻遍无鸿雁,唯自逐人流。
仙境
人情心合处,或便是仙乡。
缘共斟微斗,意同诗月光。
秦风芜巷静,汉树鹭洲长。
骤弃今朝事,洞溪看蝶扬。
七言
叶
起落枯荣总有时,韶华冷暖报君知。锦衣难了框罗物,掌托春蚕万卷丝。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-17 17:37:45 Post subject: |
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七言有些味道。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2008-01-17 19:33:31 Post subject: |
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欢迎妖刀光临北美枫!
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2008-01-17 19:41:20 Post subject: |
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欢迎妖刀朋友! |
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妖刀 童生
Joined: 17 Jan 2008 Posts: 17
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Posted: 2008-01-18 02:55:09 Post subject: |
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谢谢qinghongh和晓松招呼。:)
谢谢莹雪点评 |
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