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在峭岩古堡上倾听乡音( 外两首 )

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蔡宁1
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Posted: 2008-01-14 15:59:49 Post subject: 在峭岩古堡上倾听乡音( 外两首 )

在峭岩古堡上倾听乡音( 外两首 ) 公元1381年，明朝皇帝朱元璋从南京点兵三十万进剿西南，下令征南大军屯田戍边，从此云贵高原就有了长达六百多年的屯堡村落、屯堡人和屯堡文化。 ---------------题记蔡宁十指，裂开异乡坚硬的山岩天空一次次拈合宁碎不弯的石头从高原他乡峭岩升起内心的城堡几经明灭，一炷梵香缭绕明朝古堡砌合一片片翠芽茂密的乡情这端南京，那端贵阳天台山大明的风雨在石缝间滴滴答答自己坚守自己不老的乡愁深秋，在石堡制高点上落下一层层寒霜肃杀之气中，我渺小成一支石质的箭簇射穿时间，多少硬骨下沉绝响多少石头凌空开出一瓣瓣艳丽的花朵他乡石头咬合一段段故乡的深情复杂的细节压迫我寻亲的血管我用亲情轻轻地呼唤血缘的乡音古堡的岩石与石城的古砖一起回应筑堡的人已经远行，留下一句句方言在易守难攻的古堡一直流传一把大明利剑在沧桑的古堡锈钝梦里，江南水乡的门悄然洞开 <屯堡江南后裔的梦> 岩石砌墙，片石叠瓦盤石坚固着内心的乡愁身在异乡，血脉流淌着不息的念想依然生动着六百年前的表情我来，意外陷入未曾改变模样的明朝海拔千米的平坝高原上，她们身着六百年前的凤阳服装袖口锁着黑夜，衣襟怿动蓝天石城聚宝门的常青藤在高原蔓延屯堡沈氏家谱第一条根冒出翠绿的嫩芽牵一牵老藤，屯堡里的小桥流水人家反复演绎着秦淮河一段风情革么事啊？一句南京方言灿烂了屯堡穿越大明王朝的银杏树我在异乡触摸生动的活化石一接话头，石堡皱褶里露出梦里江南 <军傩地戏震颤着明朝 > 大红灯笼高挂起屯堡的沧桑屯堡汉子再一次戴上六百年前的面具他们头颅顶起大明的军魂持戈扬戟交锋，堡垒在面具上起伏浴血搏杀的沟壑他们唱什么？一人唱众人和单调的唱腔里悲沧着念想关公千里走单骑，长髯骤起一阵阵烈风高腔掠过层层岩石嬗变的石堡一直不曾走调浓郁的乡愁时间翻了一下对峙的面具遥远的昨天与今天仅隔着一张盾牌那些身影成为一群高原的跳神摆动旌旗摇曳一条条荒芜的驿道一招一式演绎江南水乡的飞檐翘角

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-14 18:11:51 Post subject:

很气势硬朗的诗歌~问好蔡宁老师~

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Posted: 2008-01-14 18:30:45 Post subject:

大气, 雄浑

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Posted: 2008-01-14 18:48:11 Post subject:

不錯, 段句敦實. 多發些. _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

莞君
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Posted: 2008-01-14 20:15:54 Post subject:

大气沉稳的诗欣赏了问好兄上去大家欣赏 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-01-15 18:05:31 Post subject:

不错

蔡宁1
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Posted: 2008-01-16 15:12:57 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

很气势硬朗的诗歌~问好蔡宁老师~

问好半溪明月！

六百多年对于人类的生存发展史算不了什么，然而对于一个至今忠实守护大明文化的屯堡人来说却是一段悠长的历史

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Posted: 2008-01-16 23:15:00 Post subject:

深秋，在石堡制高点上落下一层层寒霜肃杀之气中，我渺小成一支石质的箭簇射穿时间，多少硬骨下沉绝响多少石头凌空开出一瓣瓣艳丽的花朵 .............生动大气.

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Posted: 2008-01-17 07:10:07 Post subject:

这端南京，那端贵阳天台山这是什么时间？从我家门前过了？年轻的朋友？ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2008-01-19 17:26:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

大气, 雄浑

问好！多批评！

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Posted: 2008-01-21 09:02:12 Post subject:

时间翻了一下对峙的面具遥远的昨天与今天仅隔着一张盾牌那些身影成为一群高原的跳神摆动旌旗摇曳一条条荒芜的驿道一招一式演绎江南水乡的飞檐翘角这样一组高质量的诗，不能错过阅读。提起来。 _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2008-01-22 06:57:45 Post subject:

石城聚宝门的常青藤在高原蔓延屯堡沈氏家谱第一条根冒出翠绿的嫩芽牵一牵老藤，屯堡里的小桥流水人家反复演绎着秦淮河一段风情革么事啊？一句南京方言灿烂了屯堡穿越大明王朝的银杏树我在异乡触摸生动的活化石一接话头，石堡皱褶里露出梦里江南穿越历史的诗歌，厚重的一组，欣赏

蔡宁1
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Posted: 2008-01-24 01:34:07 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

不錯, 段句敦實. 多發些.

天台山距天龙屯堡2公里，以山形而得名。其山为石灰岩质的一座玲珑小山。山高60米左右，山势陡峭，如巨崖突立在四围高山峡谷之中，一面为古树枯藤掩映的蜿蜒小路，三面削壁而立，状如拾级登天之台，故名天台山。问好博弈！

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Posted: 2008-01-27 18:22:52 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

大气沉稳的诗欣赏了问好兄上去大家欣赏

问好！祝福春节快乐！

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Posted: 2008-01-28 05:54:52 Post subject:

大气，厚重！欣赏，问好！祝节日愉快！

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Posted: 2008-01-28 07:38:10 Post subject:

很好! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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Posted: 2008-02-06 23:57:46 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

深秋，在石堡制高点上落下一层层寒霜
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祝你与朋友们春节快乐，新年创作丰收！

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Posted: 2008-02-11 22:24:03 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

深秋，在石堡制高点上落下一层层寒霜
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问好福治！明天大年初七上班了，遥祝新春工作愉快！

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Posted: 2008-02-28 00:59:37 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

不錯, 段句敦實. 多發些.

问好！多批评！

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Posted: 2008-02-28 04:01:34 Post subject:

大气，坚硬 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

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