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发诗刊08.1下半月的小诗，感谢朋友们一直以来的鼓励支持！

王晓琴
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Posted: 2008-01-15 02:56:16 Post subject: 发诗刊08.1下半月的小诗，感谢朋友们一直以来的鼓励支持！

发诗刊08.1下半月的小诗，感谢朋友们一直以来的鼓励支持！今晚的月亮很干净王晓琴一次倾泻之后你，总是这么干净透明如一个分娩后的妇人轻轻飞升，于幸福之中虽然，有一点微冷走过那么远的路还象一个村姑在田头，等着阿哥那个莽汉子来就来呗，干么还牵着头牛没有听见吗蛙声脆了许多在山村也大咧咧地象吹笛子的后生很透明，很透明心情从庄子之间传递清细的声音梨花白嫩水面波纹 _________________ 安徽六安市裕安区政协王晓琴邮编：237000 伊妹儿：wangxiaoqin3@126.com 安徽琴子的BLOG http://blog.sina.com.cn/wxq3

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-15 19:02:33 Post subject:

如一个分娩后的妇人轻轻飞升，于幸福之中这个缎子，很难被说服。当然！我所见多是表象，可是这样的描述是否稍嫌简陋？ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

nobody
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Posted: 2008-01-17 03:25:15 Post subject:

恭喜晓琴。很干净，很透明，很透明。来就来呗，干么还牵着头牛不过也酸葡萄一下。这类诗歌看似无瑕，但感到缺少冲击力，较难留下痕迹。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

王晓琴
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Posted: 2008-03-07 22:45:00 Post subject:

喜欢这个配乐！ _________________ 安徽六安市裕安区政协王晓琴邮编：237000 伊妹儿：wangxiaoqin3@126.com 安徽琴子的BLOG http://blog.sina.com.cn/wxq3

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-03-07 22:57:27 Post subject:

这首诗已经在<诗刊>上发了,让我们怎么评论.我觉得最好是把你的原创诗歌发在这里.祝好!!!! _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

赵福治
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Posted: 2008-03-08 01:30:18 Post subject:

祝贺.

金金
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Posted: 2008-03-08 03:26:17 Post subject:

也提起来 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-03-08 20:51:51 Post subject:

比较清雅～祝贺晓琴！

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Posted: 2008-03-08 23:48:41 Post subject:

祝贺!

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