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七律观群牛斗狮

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-13 07:48:41 Post subject: 七律观群牛斗狮

据网载视频:非洲某国家公园前不久,惊现一场群牛斗狮的场面:四头凶猛的狮子围捕了一头小牛,水边的鳄鱼也趁火打劫,小牛危在旦夕,此刻,一群老牛奔驰而至,发起自卫反击,呼哮之,角挑之,脚踢之,终于赶跑了狮子.其场面之惨烈,令人触目惊心,为之震撼,因成七律一首以记之. 大野茫茫草木长危机四伏势苍黄眈眈猛兽湖边伺怯怯幼犊爪下亡长鳄腾身争美食群牛奋力斗凶狂生存物竞原如此御侮犹能弱转强 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
大学士

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Posted: 2008-01-13 13:29:44 Post subject:

感人之作.

晓松
举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-13 16:39:57 Post subject:

护犊情深，不论人还是动物，概没能外。黄兄恰如其分地描述出来，赞赏！

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2008-01-14 01:13:22 Post subject:

谢谢白水晓松的评阅,问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-14 08:12:25 Post subject:

黄兄妙思！于奇闻趣事中导出物竞生存之理。

qinghongh
榜眼

Joined: 14 Oct 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-14 18:33:45 Post subject:

黄老师触景写诗，妙！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-15 06:21:51 Post subject:

谢谢冰清老师庆宏赏评,问好. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

孙继廷
秀才

Joined: 21 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-16 01:41:09 Post subject:

你好.久违了.今作几幅画请指教

妖刀
童生

Joined: 17 Jan 2008
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Posted: 2008-01-17 17:04:41 Post subject:

读来很不错啊，学习了

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2008-01-18 06:24:28 Post subject:

谢谢妖刀赏读,问好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-18 22:27:08 Post subject: Re: 七律观群牛斗狮

黄洋界 wrote:

据网载视频:非洲某国家公园前不久,惊现一场群牛斗狮的场面:四头凶猛的
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黄老师，读大作的起，承，转，合，我的心也在起，承，转，合也。

黄洋界
探花

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Posted: 2008-01-19 08:29:09 Post subject:

谢谢秋叶赏评. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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