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◆与一块石头对视

冷巉
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Posted: 2008-01-11 22:38:00 Post subject: ◆与一块石头对视

◆与一块石头对视文/冷巉一块石头与你对视泪眼与心灵相拥万里之遥难以阻隔石头的愿望冷气袭来冻结春风下的定语脆弱的天空掩埋石头的残核幻想，疼痛的石头啊 ——缺陷的幸福奢望，花开 2:11 2008-1-8 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

荷梦
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Joined: 19 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2008-01-12 22:19:59 Post subject:

与一块石头对视 ——不知怎的，读这，我想起了你的那个有关哑巴与失语的散文。

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2008-01-12 22:55:21 Post subject:

幻想，疼痛的石头啊 ——缺陷的幸福奢望，花开表达含蓄而隐忍～进步不小哦，喜欢这首～

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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Posted: 2008-01-13 02:12:54 Post subject:

缺陷之美.......

迪拜
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Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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Posted: 2008-01-13 16:49:14 Post subject:

不错

阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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Location: 废墟之上
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Posted: 2008-01-21 05:46:05 Post subject:

幻想，疼痛的石头啊 ——缺陷的幸福奢望，花开这样的结尾奢望的眼睛 _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

刘雨萍
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Joined: 25 Jan 2007
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Location: Houston, TX. U.S.A
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Posted: 2008-01-21 08:45:05 Post subject:

幻想，疼痛的石头啊 ——缺陷的幸福奢望，花开一个收敛有让人有所想象的结尾。不错。 _________________ 隔海抒情

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-01-21 17:20:31 Post subject:

题目很好。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

冷巉
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Joined: 10 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-22 05:33:07 Post subject:

谢谢大家的回贴。 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

冷巉
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Joined: 10 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-22 07:54:59 Post subject:

写这首诗确实与荷梦所说有相联关。因为我越来越发现我们这个社会需要我这种哑巴。 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

溪语
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Joined: 16 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2008-01-22 08:03:19 Post subject:

与一块石头对视 ---有新意! _________________ 溪语的博客:家住鄂西

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