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舞要快乐
梅初
童生


Joined: 10 Aug 2007
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梅初Collection
PostPosted: 2008-01-12 14:42:44    Post subject: 舞要快乐 Reply with quote

1.西瓜


我不是手边的花,不是远方的树
我是西瓜


有饱满的感情和深藏的心事
有忧郁的暗纹
有装作无所谓的皮,厚厚的
一些坚强


但经不得任何刀子
经不得拒绝
从你的手中,啪
落地


2.舞要快乐


我还不成熟,等待雪的心情和看到雪的表情
像个孩子。其实等来的,不过是一件稀薄的衣
胳膊遮不住,肚脐也遮不住
甚至羞处


还好,我是孩子。不去想不快乐的事
雨水很少;设想一些温暖的情节,不喝酒
糊涂话在心里,寒流在瓶子里
雪没有理由铺天盖地


等我成熟,我允许雪随心所欲
忧伤也只选择最冷
拣一片天空,纷纷扬扬
以舒缓的舞姿


3.雪

雪不是你想象的。那么多委屈的雨
打在脸和衣服上


疼痛的时候,我还是那么爱
面颊潮红,衣服湿透,静静地
等你的怜惜


直到睫毛落上了雪蝴蝶
你还没有醒,雪花是我的葬衣
飞针走线,无言,又匆匆


直到雪停,我一无所有。合上眼睛
心碎了,散落梅枝


4.姿态

两棵树,一棵是直的,一棵是弯的
都以向上的姿态


三十多年了,第一次向上。过去的
分分秒秒都在寻找尘埃与麦粒
我拾捡自己的汗水与泪


身体想直着开花落叶,梦想是块石头
直到有一天,我弯下腰去,给云以自由
可我还是要低首啊,回忆是块石头


5.追

隐退,以花的姿势,从三月悄然进入四月
然后放马时间隧道,赶另一场风

留下的记号,那些果实,不会长久
你走开,或者坐下来写诗,风花雪月的
有关我,读给另一女子听


在你心里,我已经凋谢了。我约春风
再约春风,当雪退,春天打开大门
我开在你必经的那一树


忍着疼,我拔出一瓣,飘落你的纸笺
并轻轻呼唤你的名字,你似有记忆
起身,与我背道而驰
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2008-01-12 19:15:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

细密的心事,娓娓的言语。
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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PostPosted: 2008-01-13 16:44:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2008-01-13 17:04:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻如花蕊~
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2008-01-13 19:23:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

有饱满的感情和深藏的心事
有忧郁的暗纹
有装作无所谓的皮,厚厚的
一些坚强
...........细腻的表达.
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