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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 02:36:53    Post subject: 冰点 Reply with quote

失去温度的大街,每道的风景都写满寂寞;行人匆忙来去,厚厚的衣襟,紧紧锁住一切喜怒哀乐。风,飞舞在缝与缝之间,快速且又不著痕跡的,传递层层迭迭的严寒。

而依然无法冻结深深的情,似不断投入柴薪的烈焰,佇立在雪白如玉的灯柱下,熊熊燃烧的光与热,温暖著冰冷许久的花束;枯萎的黄,慢慢有了鲜艷的血色。

天,渐渐昏暗;灯,一盏盏亮起。「请问这束玫瑰是红色的吗?」你恭敬询问每个过路的人,举起华丽的玫瑰花束,就著浅白色的灯光,怕人们看不清楚。但是,除了惶恐和莫名的疑惑,没有人回答是或不是,人人沉默走过。

「跟我走吧!女子。这染血的玫瑰,早已看不出顏色了!」血,失去温度,也失去顏色。

「总可以留住什麼!在冰点之下,世间不会腐坏。」你喃喃自语,对著一个封存于冰点之下,未曾腐坏的苍白脸孔。

当然,总会留下什麼;几声划破天地的枪响,一束被血染红的黄玫瑰,以及社会新闻版上短短的情杀事件。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 03:23:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺凄惨的开头,短短几段文字,把读者的心揪住了。敬等下文。

紫色海洋,新年好!希望在2008年看到你更多的作品。

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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 23:17:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿,我以為我寫完了說,剛拿去世界日報投稿稿呢~~

聽您這麼一說,好像真的可以寫下去,恩,看來可以來篇靈異的。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-01-12 03:57:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

你没有在最后注明(全文完),我还以为又是一篇连载呢。
新年过完了,你的“雨雪冰霜”该更新了吧?不敢催,只是提醒一下。 Smile
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