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谷子

快活的森林
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Posted: 2008-01-06 06:00:55 Post subject: 谷子

谷子阳光催熟了饱满的谷子看到它看到了丰腴的你你的眼睛抖落了阳光今晚一场雨，将十月的光能潜入在一棵记忆你的树上让结实的树吸足了你水汪汪眼睛放射的光能岁月不能忘情谷子，我不曾忘情你 ——饱满的谷子和沃野千里 _________________ http://www.17xie.com主编,成功的出版代理人,政治经济哲学研究员,中国著名诗人,国学研究者.

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:21:28 Post subject:

结实的树吸足了你水汪汪眼睛形象, 生动欢迎新朋友, 愿你永远快活

hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:49:20 Post subject:

谷子看到了你你看到了快活的森林欢迎新朋友！ _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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快活的森林
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Posted: 2008-01-08 04:07:20 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

结实的树吸足了你水汪汪眼睛

形象, 生动

欢迎新朋友, 愿你永远快活 Very Happy

问好,也祝愿你.
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快活的森林
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Posted: 2008-01-08 04:10:29 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

谷子看到了你
你看到了快活的森林

欢迎新朋友！

问好并握手.
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迪拜
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:30:23 Post subject:

有了 “谷子” 才有 “饭吃”

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Posted: 2008-01-08 21:10:54 Post subject:

[quote="白水 Moonlight"]结实的树吸足了你水汪汪眼睛形象, 生动欢迎新朋友, 愿你永远快活 [/quote]谢谢你的欣赏和评阅. _________________ http://www.17xie.com主编,成功的出版代理人,政治经济哲学研究员,中国著名诗人,国学研究者.

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Posted: 2008-01-08 21:12:17 Post subject:

[quote="迪拜"]有了 “谷子” 才有 “饭吃”[/quote]也才有爱. _________________ http://www.17xie.com主编,成功的出版代理人,政治经济哲学研究员,中国著名诗人,国学研究者.

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-10 04:52:18 Post subject: Re: 谷子

快活的森林 wrote:

谷子

阳光催熟了饱满的谷子
看到它看到了丰腴的你
你的眼睛抖落了阳光
今晚一场雨，将十月的光能
潜入在一棵记忆你的树上
让结实的树吸足了你水汪汪眼睛

放射的光能

岁月不能忘情谷子，我不曾忘情你
——饱满的谷子和沃野千里

如果不加標點，音律上得表現顯得弱了。
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韩少君
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Posted: 2008-01-10 19:43:42 Post subject:

拜读!问好!感觉很饱满. _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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Posted: 2008-01-11 15:52:39 Post subject: Re: 谷子

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

快活的森林 wrote:

如果不加標點，音律上得表現顯得弱了。

谢谢并问好.
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Posted: 2008-01-11 15:54:32 Post subject:

韩少君 wrote:

拜读!问好!感觉很饱满.

问好,谢谢你的评阅.
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