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阿碰(组诗)
沙漠
秀才


Joined: 26 Jan 2007
Posts: 977
Location: 中国温州
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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 23:46:09    Post subject: 阿碰(组诗) Reply with quote

阿碰挑年

阿碰的算术
难于算出世道的险恶
老婆给他丢下一个未满周岁的儿子
跟人跑了。这就是他没能计算出来的

阿碰神力
挑起二百多斤的担子
疾走如飞。这样的双肩挑起生活二字
怎么就这么难。阿碰没有答案

年越近,阿碰的眉头锁得越紧
真怕孩子又问:“爸爸,咱家过年
就是放串鞭炮贴副对联?”

多少人盼望春节的假期能放长点
阿碰愁的是
肩上空空荡荡。兜里也和眼前的生活一样
空空荡荡



他问我要一条裤子温暖他的下半身

阿碰年轻时体格强壮
现在哆嗦成一个小老头
四十出头,脸上折出许多褶子
零敲碎打的生活,发不出响亮的声音
冬日的大地上,阿碰像一株无奈地迎着寒风的枯草
他知道,春天是下辈子的事
如果他还来到这块土地
现在,他只想没日没夜地拼尽气力
为他那被娘抛弃的儿子
驱走一点寒冷
我给他一支烟,他大口大口地吸着
问我有没有裤子
我突然暗叹一口气,用什么温暖他的下半生呢



一截旧木头绿了一下

阿碰和我,都有一个清贫却温暖的童年
我们像两粒紧挨着的沙砾
被风吹散,划着不相交的轨迹
几十年后的一天,阿碰站在百货大楼下
像城市的一块小小的补丁
我仔细辨认,童年的影迹已模糊
他移动起来,又像漂浮在大河里的
一截旧木头。我终于开口喊他
仿佛呼喊久远的童年
他缓慢的转身有些迷惑和吃惊
从他羞涩的眼睛,我进入到他的内部
风霜的年轮揪着我的心
然而他说到上小学的儿子,心尖绿了一下
好似他的短工生涯,一下子充满了暖意
我祈愿,他的太阳能和这冬日的太阳一样
捧出一个暖暖的午后

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半溪明月
榜眼


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PostPosted: 2008-01-05 23:58:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿碰挑年 ,挑不动的年~好沉重!
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 00:27:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有个性的诗歌,富有生活。欣赏。
他问我要一条裤子温暖他的下半身
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 13:22:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意思~~
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 13:56:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

沙漠的诗歌, 当属耐品之作.
正因如此, 曾以回车键请教, 诗歌, 散文诗, 散文之区别. 看来和我差不多, 也是不喜欢打字的. THE QUESTION 石沉大海了 Confused
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詩盜喜裸評
进士出身


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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 05:34:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

不覺得這樣的行文方式能吸引讀者,阿碰更不能!

白小姐特意委託我向您問好,您好啊!))))41
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