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[原创]鹧鸪天.无题(六首)
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PostPosted: 2008-01-06 18:30:59    Post subject: [原创]鹧鸪天.无题(六首) Reply with quote



夜夜孤灯伴梦桥,当年心事累阿娇。不堪燕羽如情剪,难为扬花似恨刀。
频说舍,又来挑,这番怒火怎能消?与天借得三分胆,莫忘奴家本姓曹!



一酒三诗月色中,梅花付与眼朦胧。痴心总为痴狂醉,冷血难将冷漠封。
从别后,怕相逢,千般苦泪咽于胸。此情非是阳关路,惟恐无颜面乃翁。



午夜箫声寄几重?安能飞过小桥东?一音吹落梅花梦,七孔调成漱玉风。
求自在,访从容,还教心事与谁同?今宵若得云来处,但使相逢在梦中。




听罢箫声听晚风,何如满地泣残红?若非箫也知吾意,才使风来慰我胸。
情切切,恨重重,一诗写就一魂空。肝肠寸寸凭今断,此夜犹成白发翁。




痛到无心痛也空,纤纤十指弄颜红。先行抹去眉间月,再许擦干唇底风。
拿玉镜,看妆容,犹如尘世雾蒙蒙。当年一入沧桑道,几个钱财几分公!



只道无钱养犬翁,而今才有此颜容。人前带尽三分笑,背后捎来四野疯。
这寒气,似隆冬,盛名不愧假严嵩。难为练就阴阳面,半作英雄半狗熊。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-07 08:22:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

古体写出刺来, 的确高手. 生活本为五味, MM好悟.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-07 11:52:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

“情切切,恨重重,一诗写就一魂空。肝肠寸寸凭今断,此夜犹成白发翁。”

人物写得惟妙惟肖,呼之欲出。对你的诗词佩服得五体投地。 Smile

祝暗香如沁安好。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-07 15:08:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

写出真性情。
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PostPosted: 2008-01-07 15:14:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

清新,流畅,厚积薄发。
“这番怒火怎能消?与天借得三分胆,莫忘奴家本姓曹!”极有个性。比问天问地问斜阳好得多~ Laughing
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PostPosted: 2008-01-08 03:28:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

无题六首,直抒胸臆.问好.
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PostPosted: 2008-01-10 17:26:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

晚辈佩服,以后还 望先生多多指教!小生敬仰!
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