送葬者 童生
Joined: 12 Nov 2007 Posts: 45
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Posted: 2008-01-07 00:32:10 Post subject: 初 恋 |
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弯弯小巷青石板
春雨无声
你轻语
你的伞破了
我红着脸
怎么也不敢
躲进你的小花伞 |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-07 01:59:49 Post subject: |
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不错的. |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
半溪明月Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-07 11:10:42 Post subject: |
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帮她修好伞~  |
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迪拜 同进士出身
Joined: 31 Oct 2006 Posts: 1588
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:09:53 Post subject: |
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怡然自得 |
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子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
子花Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-08 17:25:40 Post subject: |
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提上!我也刚发了个初恋  |
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詩盜喜裸評 进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007 Posts: 2984 Location: 台湾,台北 詩盜喜裸評Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-10 04:54:10 Post subject: |
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很具巧思,这样的作品适合写在书签上。 _________________ 可情可理,去捧就真 |
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