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秀,无色
赵雅君
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Joined: 07 Aug 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-01-08 19:50:03    Post subject: 秀,无色 Reply with quote

 秀,无色

吉林/赵雅君

眼睛吃到的美味
被描述为
秀色可餐
叫云的女人遮住妩媚
向自己的
内心深处走去
她渴望迷路
在眼睛不是嘴的地方
牧羊
裸浴
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杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-01-08 22:27:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

秀色可餐一词引出的诗歌,由秀引出一个很纯美的女人,但这个女人似乎不那么守规矩阿。
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半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-01-08 22:49:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

在眼睛不是嘴的地方
牧羊
裸浴

不错~ Smile
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-01-09 10:40:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

清纯自然.
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莞君
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Joined: 20 Oct 2007
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PostPosted: 2008-01-09 12:23:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

干净 的语言 很好的一个 学习了 问好
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迪拜
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PostPosted: 2008-01-09 18:14:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

有意思

有味道
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-01-10 03:49:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

很清楚,可惜沒味道。
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