Maple Review :: View topic - 月光滑雪技术不高(别提, 只是想放进文集)

	Chinese Literature Society of North America \| Maple Review \| Immigrants in Canada \| Angel Studio \| The Driftwood Artist Society \| Ocean of Poetry \| Island of Music "HuaHe Cup" 2007 Chinese Mainland and Oversea Poetry Competition and Non-governmental Magazines and Newspapers Joint Exhibition starts on the first day of 2007.
	FAQ Search Memberlist Usergroups Register Profile Log in to check your private messages Sign in Blogs Weblogs News Album



Dictionary Check Poems' Rules & Forms Search for Chinese Poems Poetry & Music

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

月光滑雪技术不高(别提, 只是想放进文集)

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2007-12-06 15:23:08 Post subject: 月光滑雪技术不高(别提, 只是想放进文集)

临一个。哈哈。今夜的月光酡红抄起滑雪板滑下落矶山绕过松阴避开鹿角却仰面摔倒在我家池塘 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-12-06 15:54:47 Post subject:

非要来看看怎么把跟我的诗歌搬出来了

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2007-12-06 15:58:37 Post subject:

想放进文集, 留作遗产, 证明他祖上识字 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-12-06 16:09:59 Post subject:

ME TOO

kokho
进士出身

Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
kokhoCollection

Posted: 2007-12-07 19:07:00 Post subject:

。喜欢　和美女滑雪　难怪这么有文采　：）。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

上城
进士出身

Joined: 15 Mar 2007
Posts: 2024
Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
上城Collection

Posted: 2007-12-08 02:22:14 Post subject:

_________________ 每个诗人都很重要

杯中冲浪
进士出身

Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
杯中冲浪Collection

Posted: 2007-12-08 02:25:50 Post subject:

却仰面摔倒在我家池塘 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-12-08 08:06:57 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

却仰面摔倒在
我家池塘
Very Happy

冲浪, 这没人拿我开心, 你还笑.
没所谓了, 仰面摔倒时, 我就和天站在对等的位置上. FACE TO FACE. Very Happy

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2007-12-08 10:45:26 Post subject:

不知道背景的，也可以把月光当作真的从上面下来的月光来读，哈哈所以月光滑雪技术不高双关。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2007-12-08 10:51:46 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

不知道背景的，也可以把月光当作真的从上面下来的月光来读，哈哈 Laughing

所以月光滑雪技术不高双关。 Laughing

http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?t=9886

得, 还是把我的诗歌跟这吧.
我啥时候非想法子写个让大家笑没人的 Razz

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2007-12-08 10:58:47 Post subject:

谢谢月光。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

悠子
举人

Joined: 04 Jan 2008
Posts: 1383
Location: US
悠子Collection

Posted: 2008-01-08 11:39:16 Post subject:

本来蛮优美的，被你说的这么狼狈~。。。可怜的月光

黑雨滴
秀才

Joined: 11 Jun 2007
Posts: 144

黑雨滴Collection

Posted: 2008-01-09 14:03:03 Post subject:

非要得提提，很意味深长的诗 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2008-01-09 15:34:29 Post subject:

真是叛逆的一代啊，哈哈。谢谢忽悠子和黑太白 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

白水
大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
白水Collection

Posted: 2008-01-09 16:36:40 Post subject:

当时只顾开玩笑了, 现在细读, 这首诗歌还真不错.

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2008-01-09 18:41:00 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

当时只顾开玩笑了, 现在细读, 这首诗歌还真不错. Very Happy

那还得多谢你给的灵感啊，哈哈。
拟了月光的人，滑稽地下来会我。不是玩笑着，还没这效果呢。
感谢啦，抛玉引砖 Laughing

_________________
I'm nobody! Who are you?

詩盜喜裸評
进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
詩盜喜裸評Collection

Posted: 2008-01-10 03:30:46 Post subject:

只映像出一個畫面，你家的池塘還真不小！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

詩盜喜裸評
进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
詩盜喜裸評Collection

Posted: 2008-01-11 03:58:12 Post subject:

扭吧！扭吧～弟！白小姐特意委託我向您問好，您好啊！））））19 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

nobody
进士出身

Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
nobodyCollection

Posted: 2008-01-11 18:42:28 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

扭吧！扭吧～弟！

白小姐特意委託我向您問好，您好啊！））））19

说！收了多少委托费，转眼把我枫广告贴满全国各主要电线杆和卫生间。。。 Laughing

_________________
I'm nobody! Who are you?

詩盜喜裸評
进士出身

Joined: 15 May 2007
Posts: 2984
Location: 台湾，台北
詩盜喜裸評Collection

Posted: 2008-01-11 18:54:17 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

扭吧！扭吧～弟！

白小姐特意委託我向您問好，您好啊！））））19

说！收了多少委托费，转眼把我枫广告贴满全国各主要电线杆和卫生间。。。 Laughing

恩，不多，剛好沒得朋分！
_________________
可情可理，去捧就真

Display posts from previous:

Emoticons





View more Emoticons

Page 1 of 1 View previous topic View next topic

Maple Review Home -> 现代诗歌

Once you post your works here, that means you submits them to the magazine of Maple Review (North American Maple, or BeiMeiFeng), a bilingual journal published by Chinese Literature Society of North America. The magazine holds the right to translate them into Chinese, and publish them in both languages. You need to be responsible for the copyright issues of your own files uploaded.
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
phpBB Chinese interface was translated by iCy-fLaME