莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-08 19:30:50 Post subject: 七绝—梅 |
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似醉东风眠好梦,闲身伴日俏梅容。
曲声婉转歌冬去,诗意馨幽雅意浓。 |
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暗香如沁 秀才
Joined: 14 Jan 2007 Posts: 885 Location: 北京 暗香如沁Collection |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-09 11:54:14 Post subject: |
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| [quote="暗香如沁"]雪好诗,写的婉约之极.[/quote]谢谢姐姐点评!我一定继续努力。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2008-01-09 12:41:31 Post subject: |
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| 诗雅曲悠。 |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-09 13:01:17 Post subject: |
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| [quote="qinghongh"]诗雅曲悠。[/quote]谢谢GG点评! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-09 13:55:43 Post subject: |
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| 曲声婉转,诗意馨幽。欣赏~ |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2008-01-09 16:51:55 Post subject: |
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谢谢晓松兄点评! |
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