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梅园，另一个奇异的女子

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Posted: 2008-01-04 05:29:05 Post subject: 梅园，另一个奇异的女子

梅园，另一个奇异的女子站在落雪的季节，静静地，听她的箫声，并不寂寞白与红，写在蕾间月与箫声，同样的颜色梅园的箫弄，是一个奇异的女子蜂蝶，在那个春日就早已睡去亭台，只停留在这个冬天偶尔的声音这样的夜晚，属于梅花还有她——轻薄的红唇召唤香径中，两串泠泠的脚印她挽起另一个女子的手把所有的记忆，都留给这个受伤的冬天我在月下，堆两个雪人让它们与太阳一起，慢慢融化 _________________ 518055 广东省深圳市南山区西丽湖沙河西路4089号深圳职业技术学院人文学院赵目珍(收) Email：zmzlong@163.com

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Posted: 2008-01-04 06:15:47 Post subject:

我在月下，堆两个雪人让它们与太阳一起，慢慢融化 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2008-01-04 11:36:13 Post subject:

北残的诗歌总是那么柔美喜欢

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Posted: 2008-01-04 12:38:58 Post subject:

欣赏了问好兄 _________________ 莞君

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Posted: 2008-01-07 03:21:52 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

我在月下，堆两个雪人
让它们与太阳一起，慢慢融化

谢谢
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Posted: 2008-01-07 03:22:19 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

我在月下，堆两个雪人
让它们与太阳一起，慢慢融化

问好
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Posted: 2008-01-07 03:22:39 Post subject:

莞君 wrote:

欣赏了问好兄

谢谢
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Posted: 2008-01-09 14:33:25 Post subject:

意境优美

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Posted: 2008-01-09 19:42:30 Post subject:

谢谢 _________________ 518055 广东省深圳市南山区西丽湖沙河西路4089号深圳职业技术学院人文学院赵目珍(收) Email：zmzlong@163.com

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Posted: 2008-01-10 03:27:37 Post subject:

以空行論，這首一幕一幕呈現，確實能引領讀者進入詩境之中。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-01-12 23:55:14 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

以空行論，這首一幕一幕呈現，確實能引領讀者進入詩境之中。

谢谢兄弟...
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