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七绝<冬雪吟>六首

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:14:26 Post subject: 七绝<冬雪吟>六首

七绝<冬雪吟> (一) 泪洒穹庐大地开翩翩界外玉蝶来梁兄独赴黄泉路师弟芳魂飞絮白 (二) 海棠败落几多枝淑玉冬深卷帘迟晨雪一杯邀暮酒浅吟君子未归时 (三) 薄棉不暖黄藤酒柳断宫墙咏絮词可叹郎君文笔尽灰飞烟灭悔时迟 (四) 飞雪悠悠诗绢裁瑶池桃李世间开低吟洪度笺三尺玉女津深玉女哀 (五) 骄子狂书铜雀台芙蓉绝色锁尘埃小乔琴瑟胭脂井哭向周郎不释怀 (六) 烽火焚青腾碧雪贵妃凝脂九龙汤霓裳曼舞君王笑天下名伶改姓杨

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-01-08 13:05:50 Post subject:

白水兄好诗！拜读了。“黄腾酒”是否应为“黄藤酒”？快手敲错字？

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-08 13:31:17 Post subject:

[quote="qinghongh"]白水兄好诗！拜读了。“黄腾酒”是否应为“黄藤酒”？快手敲错字？[/quote] 是, 谢谢你, 我这就改

豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-09 03:31:39 Post subject:

何人裁絮漫天开，落地随风卷又来。壮哉芳意成摇落，泣此悲兮泣此哀。 _________________

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-09 04:27:55 Post subject:

谢谢豆豆 (四) 飞雪悠悠诗绢裁瑶池桃李世间开低吟洪度笺三尺玉女津深玉女哀

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-09 11:35:26 Post subject:

尤喜二三首,颇有韵致. _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-09 15:02:39 Post subject:

[quote="黄洋界"]尤喜二三首,颇有韵致.[/quote] 谢谢黄老师. 问好

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-11 13:31:28 Post subject:

意幽情浓。

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-13 11:39:11 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

意幽情浓。

谢谢MM

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-13 11:40:54 Post subject:

(五) 骄子狂书铜雀台芙蓉绝色锁尘埃小乔琴瑟胭脂井哭向周郎不释怀 (六) 烽火焚青腾碧雪贵妃凝脂九龙汤霓裳曼舞君王笑天下名伶改姓杨

晓松
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Posted: 2008-01-13 16:43:39 Post subject:

几乎每首都含一段佳话，欣赏！

duzhi
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Posted: 2008-01-13 21:29:52 Post subject:

意境优美,欣赏. _________________ 清狂傲世随天性,仗义疏财任我行。博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/duzhizhang440

冰清
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Posted: 2008-01-14 08:06:27 Post subject:

几经描画、点染，人物、佳话和诗人慨惜之情跃然纸上!

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-14 18:42:38 Post subject:

问好晓松, DUZHI, 冰清谢谢鼓励

梅影三叠
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Posted: 2008-01-15 02:57:22 Post subject:

翩翩界外玉蝶来飞雪悠悠诗绢裁瑶池桃李世间开好美！

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