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礼物

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:56:47 Post subject: 礼物

脚走出门外，才看见邻家的一棵无花果死了。那年冬天他们家唯一的女儿走了，在父母的眼泪上刻完微笑，就再也没有回来阳光走进房间，风被当在门外。老人的床头堆积着别人的炫耀，罪恶的手把他们可怜的，不能再可怜的思念统统掏空村头的人群，在时代里变幻。宝马的轮子在麦田里不再高傲，男人沦陷在女人的吐沫里。指尖积攒着留守老人的叹息与微笑中国.江苏.张敏

nobody
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Posted: 2008-01-08 17:30:16 Post subject:

在父母的眼泪上刻完微笑写的精彩，内容沉重。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

子花
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Posted: 2008-01-08 17:31:16 Post subject:

刻完微笑感觉不是太好！！新年快乐

游旋1
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Posted: 2008-01-09 02:28:23 Post subject:

有力度,品读! _________________ 用文字结缘拿鸿雁对话

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-01-09 11:50:01 Post subject:

谢谢大家的支持,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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Posted: 2008-01-09 12:18:29 Post subject: 欣赏问好

很好的一个 _________________ 莞君

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-01-09 18:13:27 Post subject:

不错

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-10 03:51:50 Post subject: Re: 礼物

zhangmin wrote:

脚走出门外，才看见
邻家的一棵无花果死了。那年冬天
他们家唯一的女儿走了，在父母的眼泪上
刻完微笑，就再也没有回来

阳光走进房间，风
被当在门外。老人的床头
堆积着别人的炫耀，罪恶的手
把他们可怜的，不能再可怜的思念
统统掏空

村头的人群，在时代里
变幻。宝马的轮子
在麦田里不再高傲，男人
沦陷在女人的吐沫里。指尖积攒着
留守老人的叹息与微笑
中国.江苏.张敏

（中国.江苏.张敏）什麼意義？
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可情可理，去捧就真

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-01-10 11:43:45 Post subject:

谢谢莞君,谢谢迪拜,远握. 你好詩盜喜裸評,你想知道这首诗的意思么?现在的礼物是贵重了,在一起的天伦却少了.远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

韩少君
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Posted: 2008-01-10 12:03:57 Post subject:

是金灿灿的轮子，把水灵灵的桂兰子或娇媚媚的阿袖拐跑了，是钢铁和橡胶的宝马，让我在山坡上撒欢的驹儿自惭形秽。问好！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-10 12:28:04 Post subject:

宝马的轮子在麦田里不再高傲，男人沦陷在女人的吐沫里。

zhangmin
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Posted: 2008-01-13 11:56:21 Post subject:

谢谢韩少君,谢谢半溪明月,远握. _________________ 风走过，灯灭了，黑夜里你的烟雾尘埃在我的眼泪里。月光下的影子总为屋檐下的风铃疗伤。

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