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第七个圣诞的呼吸

春雨
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Posted: 2008-01-07 22:32:45 Post subject: 第七个圣诞的呼吸

第七个圣诞的呼吸一缕重叠的呼吸舞动在闭上眼睛的时刻被时光卷走的情景我只能挥手因为那个平凡的楼层每次见到我都会有不同的表情我应当感谢那位大娘的离去是送她时我看到了最熟悉的你在那个喧闹的场合里给了我最陌生的微笑拍打着嘈杂游向孤寂飞翔在对你的回忆现在我感到了第七个圣诞的呼吸当光明把眼前的一切捧入我的视觉便有两行脚印让我不知所措一行飘在空中一行印在我的心里 _________________ 用一只笔犁过春天，写下我忧伤的诗行！！

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:25:46 Post subject:

不错

黑雨滴
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Posted: 2008-01-09 14:04:35 Post subject:

问好 _________________ 个人主页：http://blog.sina.com.cn/afirewang

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-01-09 18:17:08 Post subject:

抒情

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-10 03:45:35 Post subject:

第一句就可以吸住讀者目光，作者對音律的掌握很有一套。這些，掩蓋了內容的不明。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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