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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2006-12-21 23:55:17    Post subject: 寂 寞 Reply with quote

寂 寞

———— 司马策风


长 夜——
把心高悬为孤月
游云是路过的蚁堆
搔痒着展转的梦靥

三三两两的滑窗冷雨
爬行在无眠的窗棂
那是悉悉索索的蝎子
毒 蛰 神 经

莫非我是令人朝拜的睡佛
在红尘中参禅蹉跎
木鱼合掌颂经的咒语
举我在云水上的莲花长卧

莫非我是众人追随的基督
十字架是必背的勋章
难道真的要用我的鲜血
在黑夜上画一片曙光



2006,3,4
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PostPosted: 2006-12-22 00:01:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

优美的哲思,
语言形象生动:

木 鱼 合 掌 颂 经 的 咒 语

举 我 在 云 水 上 的 莲 花 长 卧
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PostPosted: 2006-12-22 17:00:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

一轮孤月浮云水, 漫漫长夜诗如潮

温哥华之夜酝酿了多少诗歌......

圣诞将近, 在此谨祝圣诞快乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2006-12-23 01:45:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢岛兄赞誉。祝你圣诞快乐。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-23 01:47:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢月光的光临。预祝圣诞快乐。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-23 03:13:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

意象华丽,洗净。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-23 23:12:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢北方狼兄阅读赞誉

圣诞快乐
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PostPosted: 2006-12-25 08:23:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好。
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PostPosted: 2006-12-25 14:39:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢维鹿延光临。

新年好
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PostPosted: 2006-12-25 15:05:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

这么多人喜欢
加个精
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PostPosted: 2006-12-25 20:24:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

多谢岛主和以上各位的抬爱褒奖。

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PostPosted: 2006-12-26 01:57:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读了!问好!
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PostPosted: 2006-12-26 02:54:41    Post subject: Reply with quote

长夜更兼冷雨,寂寞诉谁知?
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PostPosted: 2006-12-27 23:23:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢荷梦知音送诗。

新年好
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PostPosted: 2007-01-07 21:51:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢鹤雨的点评和问好。

送你新年好
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PostPosted: 2007-09-12 20:06:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

再读
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 05:14:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

有末世情感的人都寂寞 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-09-14 21:14:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

伤城 wrote:
有末世情感的人都寂寞 Very Happy



感谢伤城兄关注。你的这句“有末世情感的人都寂寞”算得是掺透了

“禅机”
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PostPosted: 2007-09-16 20:37:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

很喜欢这个主题的诗歌
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PostPosted: 2007-09-16 22:33:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

金金 wrote:
很喜欢这个主题的诗歌


感谢金金先生欣赏喜欢。握个!
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