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《冬日》及其他

kino
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Posted: 2008-01-06 02:13:14 Post subject: 《冬日》及其他

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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:18:32 Post subject:

精湛, 哲理

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Posted: 2008-01-06 13:20:29 Post subject:

不错的诗歌《冬日》有意思~~

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Posted: 2008-01-06 16:07:30 Post subject:

很有味的几个欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2008-01-06 22:17:51 Post subject:

《冬日》正午我从树下走过阳光很好叶子落了一地一条红色的内裤挂在低枝上晾晒 ————耐人寻味，冬日的阳光很好，而红色的内裤更令人心动。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

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Posted: 2008-01-06 22:41:39 Post subject:

喜欢冬日 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2008-01-07 01:46:01 Post subject:

很久没来了~~忙要死，问好楼上各位了！

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-11 05:07:52 Post subject:

哇哈哈～笑死我啦！白小姐特意委託我向您問好，您好啊！））））34 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2008-01-12 02:38:28 Post subject:

怎么了？慢慢笑~~~~ 问好您，也问好白小姐~~

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-12 05:33:07 Post subject:

（冬日）太好笑了！这次我选择（徒劳）我偏执地的坚持着（地的）刻意安排？謝謝！會將您的問候安全送達！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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