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悠子
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Posted: 2008-01-05 09:02:04 Post subject: 蝴蝶花/交错

*蝴蝶花* 寒风里的蝴蝶花把紫色，深深浅浅毫不相干的开放在季节的外面隐约在冰凉的寂静和生机柔弱的细语着缤纷年华般的花园那仿佛属于你和我的春天就这样，在清冷与萧瑟之间轻而易举的感动一如你走过我身边让我轻轻地，拾起爱恋。。。 12/11/2007 ###交错### 所有的迷惑只因，匆忙中与你交错清风吹拂从彼此的心底升起宛如异香飘过打破静默似初冬的雪梦幻着，纷飞的感觉冷瑟的北风无法梳理关于你的一切是否还要顺着轨道前行累了，这个无座标的航索仿佛没有止境不知道是否会有属于你，和我的黎明 12/04/2007

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-05 09:53:56 Post subject:

悠悠，好！門口看見你的ID。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

沙漠
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Posted: 2008-01-05 13:48:15 Post subject:

这两个不错,结尾都有韵味! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180

悠子
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Posted: 2008-01-05 13:57:43 Post subject:

谢谢沙漠。想请教您怎么精减<月光>呢？有人逼着我请教的

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-05 15:38:35 Post subject:

看來沙漠不怎麼熱情！歐陽非非唱錯了。 _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

迪拜
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Posted: 2008-01-05 17:57:20 Post subject:

花总是好看的

半溪明月
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Posted: 2008-01-05 20:13:57 Post subject:

不错～问好新朋友！

杨海军
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Posted: 2008-01-05 21:57:24 Post subject:

否还要顺着轨道前行累了，这个无座标的航索仿佛没有止境不知道是否会有属于你，和我的黎明 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

悠子
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Posted: 2008-01-06 03:53:22 Post subject:

谢谢迪拜, 半溪明月, 杨海军, 问好当然，还有盗盗~

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-06 04:31:33 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

谢谢迪拜, 半溪明月, 杨海军, 问好
当然，还有盗盗~

差別待遇總是令人心裡不舒坦！還好對你有一些認識，否則～亨！
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悠子
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Posted: 2008-01-06 06:19:41 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

差別待遇總是令人心裡不舒坦！還好對你有一些認識，否則～亨！

哇，好的差别待遇还不满意？再问一遍好~

hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:33:57 Post subject:

欢迎悠子： http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=58520#58520 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:36:17 Post subject:

悠子 wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

差別待遇總是令人心裡不舒坦！還好對你有一些認識，否則～亨！

哇，好的差别待遇还不满意？再问一遍好~

害！怎可以小人之心度君子之腹！！我那麼有正義感的人，我是為三位大哥抱不平呀！

黑～好心有好報！白賺了一回好～
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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:44:02 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

谢谢迪拜, 半溪明月, 杨海军, 问好
当然，还有盗盗~

差別待遇總是令人心裡不舒坦！還好對你有一些認識，否則～亨！

欢迎詩盜喜裸評：
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=58523#58523

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:50:54 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

谢谢迪拜, 半溪明月, 杨海军, 问好
当然，还有盗盗~

差別待遇總是令人心裡不舒坦！還好對你有一些認識，否則～亨！

欢迎詩盜喜裸評：
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=58523#58523

哇～哈哈！樂死～又多賺了一回歡迎！

可惜只看到悠悠下半身，走著，在畫片裡！
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hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-01-06 09:55:21 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

悠子 wrote:

谢谢迪拜, 半溪明月, 杨海军, 问好
当然，还有盗盗~

差別待遇總是令人心裡不舒坦！還好對你有一些認識，否則～亨！

欢迎詩盜喜裸評：
http://oson.ca/viewtopic.php?p=58523#58523

哇～哈哈！樂死～又多賺了一回歡迎！

可惜只看到悠悠下半身，走著，在畫片裡！

才晕呢
我去图片搜索悠子两个字
结果出来
全是火爆的日本美女
Laughing

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-06 10:02:58 Post subject:

吼吼！真的耶～可惜沒有一個長得像悠悠！真可惜～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-01-06 10:07:48 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

吼吼！真的耶～可惜沒有一個長得像悠悠！真可惜～

因为没见过悠悠
我不敢冒然引用啦

詩盜喜裸評
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Posted: 2008-01-06 11:24:17 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

吼吼！真的耶～可惜沒有一個長得像悠悠！真可惜～

因为没见过悠悠
我不敢冒然引用啦

這島主您放心，不至於像個紅叉叉！

根據有力消息人士透露，悠子身高一米68，體重49.68公斤，三圍資料被不知名人士擷取，尚待索討！面容姣好，年紀約28歲。才藝雙全，能歌善舞，花道烹飪等樣樣精通，所以筆名諧音：優字。
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hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-01-06 11:30:06 Post subject:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

hepingdao wrote:

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:

吼吼！真的耶～可惜沒有一個長得像悠悠！真可惜～

因为没见过悠悠
我不敢冒然引用啦

這島主您放心，不至於像個紅叉叉！

根據有力消息人士透露，悠子身高一米68，體重49.68公斤，三圍資料被不知名人士擷取，尚待索討！面容姣好，年紀約28歲。才藝雙全，能歌善舞，花道烹飪等樣樣精通，所以筆名諧音：優字。

哇

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