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豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-05 01:09:43 Post subject: 七律·和秋叶叔叔

回望丁亥似匆匆，爱惜惟堪乱纸中。固守烟窗行义气，虚张片瓦旋寒风。半杯老酒研浓醋，一碗凉茶映碧空。思将凡眼超尘世，但揪鼻准妄穹穹。 _________________

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Posted: 2008-01-05 02:07:06 Post subject:

哈, 毛毛好可爱. 大观园的怡红公子终于出来了. 怎么贴个女孩儿的照片? 又调皮

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-05 10:22:18 Post subject: Re: 七律·和秋叶叔叔

豆腐渣 wrote:

回望丁亥似匆匆，爱惜惟堪乱纸中。固守烟窗行义气，虚张片瓦旋寒风。
半杯老酒研浓醋，一碗凉茶映碧空。思将凡眼超尘世，但揪鼻准妄穹穹。

豆豆啊，和得太妙了，谢谢！有空带你去Wonderland sticking tongue

莹雪
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Posted: 2008-01-06 12:17:26 Post subject:

欢迎，欢迎！

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-06 16:00:04 Post subject:

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豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-07 04:56:58 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

哈, 毛毛好可爱.
大观园的怡红公子终于出来了. 怎么贴个女孩儿的照片? 又调皮 good boy

水阿姨，俺是女孩儿呀，不是臭小子呀，是不是以为我是万金油啊
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豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-07 04:58:40 Post subject: Re: 七律·和秋叶叔叔

秋叶 wrote:

豆豆啊，和得太妙了，谢谢！有空带你去Wonderland sticking tongue

叔叔，Wonderland里有豆腐渣吃吗？
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豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-07 04:59:28 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

欢迎，欢迎！

问阿姨好！好像我有点儿吃亏
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白水
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Posted: 2008-01-08 12:34:03 Post subject:

[quote="豆腐渣"][quote="白水 Moonlight"]哈, 毛毛好可爱. 大观园的怡红公子终于出来了. 怎么贴个女孩儿的照片? 又调皮 [/quote] 水阿姨，俺是女孩儿呀，不是臭小子呀，是不是以为我是万金油啊[/quote] 好了, 是我错了还不行吗. 你不是臭小子. 那我就不叫你万金油,叫你千金豆腐好吗

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-01-08 13:29:38 Post subject:

又来一调皮的小丫头！

豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-08 20:47:31 Post subject:

次秋叶叔叔的“匆中风空穹”韵，答行者叔叔兼致秋天的枫叶林何妨聚散总匆匆，都在深杯浅啜中。月转晓烟迎漫雪，云回秋叶索条风。笙歌懒写油麻嗲，曲赋怜吟假大空。不是花亭添别恨，只因柳浦尽穷穹。 _________________

豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-08 20:49:29 Post subject:

次秋叶叔叔的“匆中风空穹”韵，谢秋叶叔叔赠，兼答艺芳阿姨此处徘徊不冗匆，竹筒摇豆乱其中。缘情何幸逢佳丽，移思犹惭拂清风。薄望无辞长夜尽，环闻独听小弦空。消魂可在酒杯里，共赏幽香更壁穹。 _________________

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Posted: 2008-01-11 18:12:36 Post subject:

豆腐渣 wrote:

莹雪 wrote:

欢迎，欢迎！

问阿姨好！好像我有点儿吃亏

不吃亏，不吃亏，你都叫“白水”为‘水姨’啦！你的水姨，我叫姐姐，所以嘛！ Wink

你不吃亏。叫俺莹姨吧！俺听着舒服 lalalala

豆豆乖

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Posted: 2008-01-12 09:09:26 Post subject:

毛毛写到: 人吧，既没名又没望真的不行，我偌大的黑体字竟然没看见，看来我真的需要叠韵“匆中风空穹”，赠答毛毛一首：毛毛捣乱毋匆匆，不在高呼浅叫中。细语轻柔如漫雪，快言飒爽似金风。吡牙咧嘴大傻笑，缺齿摇头小口空。最是知名君忘记，伟人尊姓盖苍穹。

豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-14 01:37:46 Post subject:

秋叶叔叔，从你的这首诗可以看出，你不善于临屏 _________________

白水
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Posted: 2008-01-14 02:11:23 Post subject:

这叫认真

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Posted: 2008-01-14 18:49:09 Post subject:

豆腐好，不用渣。豆腐小丫头，一品豆腐是你家什么人？豆腐来，豆腐去，个个鬼才，把人都搞晕了。一大堆调皮小丫头，象花果山的小猴子！

果味儿豆腐
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Posted: 2008-01-17 06:24:13 Post subject:

亭檐风静雪含铃，寺殿钟开广陌声。高阁游来颇顺眼，笔锋挥去乱涂鲸。闲谈正史知今古，斜倚幽窗识淡平。人心高下不过此，何须拍得马臀轻。 _________________

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Posted: 2008-01-20 06:02:37 Post subject:

掩耳何妨盗哑铃，劳歌深锁叶枯声。秦皇鞭石成虚构，汉武求仙枉幻鲸。不自寻思空有梦，为谁吟唱漫清平。古来今往如行者，雪煮茶心戏语轻。 _________________ 总也长不大^-^

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Posted: 2008-02-01 04:59:23 Post subject:

夕坐横琴半举卮，不怀疏广独游痴。炉温壶酒曾先后，寒压冰池已久时。鼻孔插葱充大象，额头隆骨仿山犀。何须频折河边柳，幽咽离歌别有迟。 _________________

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