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趟过元旦的河流

春雨
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Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 31
Location: 中国吉林
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Posted: 2008-01-03 10:27:43 Post subject: 趟过元旦的河流

趟过元旦的河流用脚印助燃希望为一个等待踏歌而行它吸吮我的存在我感觉了它的流动太阳用普通的轨迹划出一个崭新的起点这个起点曾躺在书本中的地平线一种指令扯破一种平衡　回头看时我找不到想要的感觉透过清澈的黑夜盼望中的声音没有慰籍听觉回忆怂恿着欲望　　欲望就在理智的边缘横冲直撞静卧小憩的时侯我在听别人评论李白的靴子和墨汁趟过元旦的河流盼望那个许诺能在今天之后的某一天发笌挥手的含义只有目光能够解释而我只想在迎接的时侯做好告别 _________________ 用一只笔犁过春天，写下我忧伤的诗行！！

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
Posts: 2205
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Posted: 2008-01-03 10:31:56 Post subject:

不错，努力！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

迪拜
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Joined: 31 Oct 2006
Posts: 1588

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Posted: 2008-01-04 18:49:40 Post subject:

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