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七律-回望 2007

秋叶
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Posted: 2007-12-31 12:59:23 Post subject: 七律-回望 2007

祝各位新年好！看到各位大作，有空即详细拜读，先草上一首，望各位赐教。七律-回望 2007 人生回望又匆匆，岁晚沉思寥寂中。所幸同俦微异己，尚存片瓦对寒风。故人渺渺烟云散，大雪茫茫塔影空。浪迹天涯停泊处，歌吟动地啸苍穹。寂，迹，泊—入声

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:25:09 Post subject:

哈, 拜读大作. 问好新年.

他乡客
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:49:23 Post subject:

所幸同俦微异己，尚存片瓦对寒风。快哉！有气魄。秋叶兄，白水兄，新年好！

晓松
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Posted: 2007-12-31 13:56:07 Post subject:

终于在岁末等来了秋叶兄的大作，真有喜出望外的感觉~ 秋叶兄新年快乐！

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-31 14:00:58 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

终于在岁末等来了秋叶兄的大作，真有喜出望外的感觉~
秋叶兄新年快乐！

你们越这么说, 他越牛 Very Happy

瞧, 又不理大家了不是.

就说什么破诗歌, 还不写首新的来 Wink

qinghongh
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Posted: 2007-12-31 14:52:44 Post subject:

拜读秋叶兄大作，学习了。祝新年好！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2008-01-01 05:20:33 Post subject:

"浪迹天涯停泊处" 秋叶红于二月花,祝新年好! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-01 17:45:23 Post subject:

他乡客 wrote:

所幸同俦微异己，尚存片瓦对寒风。

快哉！有气魄。秋叶兄，白水兄，新年好！ Wink

他乡客新年好！谢谢鼓励。

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-01 17:49:19 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

终于在岁末等来了秋叶兄的大作，真有喜出望外的感觉~
秋叶兄新年快乐！

晓松兄，新年快乐，万事如意！

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-01 17:52:04 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

拜读秋叶兄大作，学习了。祝新年好！

谢谢qinghongh兄赏读，也祝您新年快乐！

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-01 17:55:17 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

"浪迹天涯停泊处"
秋叶红于二月花,祝新年好!

谢谢赠句，黄老师，祝您新年进步，身体健康！

秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-01 18:02:20 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

晓松 wrote:

终于在岁末等来了秋叶兄的大作，真有喜出望外的感觉~
秋叶兄新年快乐！

你们越这么说, 他越牛 Very Happy

瞧, 又不理大家了不是.

就说什么破诗歌, 还不写首新的来 Wink

白水兄，稍安勿躁，

qinghongh
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Posted: 2008-01-03 10:36:10 Post subject: Re: 七律-回望 2007

秋叶 wrote:

祝各位新年好！看到各位大作，有空即详细拜读，先草上一首，望各位赐教。

七律-回望 2007

人生回望又匆匆，岁晚沉思寥寂中。
所幸同俦微异己，尚存片瓦对寒风。
故人渺渺烟云散，大雪茫茫塔影空。
浪迹天涯停泊处，歌吟动地啸苍穹。

寂，迹，泊—入声

七律和秋叶〈回望 2007〉（新韵）

生活忙碌太匆匆，岁末偏逢大雪中。
入住新居摆盛宴，邀来旧友论诗风。
天涯运笔填佳句，故土思亲盼再逢。
回望经年多感叹，临屏寄语自谦躬。

豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-05 01:05:56 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

晓松 wrote:

终于在岁末等来了秋叶兄的大作，真有喜出望外的感觉~
秋叶兄新年快乐！

你们越这么说, 他越牛 Very Happy

瞧, 又不理大家了不是.

就说什么破诗歌, 还不写首新的来 Wink

阿姨，我以为这是秋叶叔叔的新作呢。他没有，我有，哼

回望丁亥似匆匆，爱惜惟堪乱纸中。固守烟窗行义气，虚张片瓦旋寒风。
半杯老酒研浓醋，一碗凉茶映碧空。思将凡眼超尘世，但揪鼻准妄穹穹。
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秋叶
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Posted: 2008-01-08 19:47:27 Post subject:

[quote="豆腐渣"]阿姨，我以为这是秋叶叔叔的新作呢。他没有，我有，哼回望丁亥似匆匆，爱惜惟堪乱纸中。固守烟窗行义气，虚张片瓦旋寒风。半杯老酒研浓醋，一碗凉茶映碧空。思将凡眼超尘世，但揪鼻准妄穹穹。[/quote] 怎麽不是新的，还有更新的呢：叠韵“匆中风空穹”，赠答豆腐渣一首：豆渣捣乱毋匆匆，不在高呼浅叫中。细语轻柔如漫雪，快言飒爽似金风。吡牙咧嘴大傻笑，缺齿摇头小口空。最是知名君忘记，伟人尊姓震苍穹。

豆腐渣
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Posted: 2008-01-08 20:50:26 Post subject:

次秋叶叔叔的“匆中风空穹”韵，谢秋叶叔叔赠，兼答艺芳阿姨此处徘徊不冗匆，竹筒摇豆乱其中。缘情何幸逢佳丽，移思犹惭拂清风。薄望无辞长夜尽，环闻独听小弦空。消魂可在酒杯里，共赏幽香更壁穹。 _________________

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