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盘点2007(久未来祝各位新年快乐!)
漂之雨
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Joined: 01 Dec 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-01-02 00:39:22    Post subject: 盘点2007(久未来祝各位新年快乐!) Reply with quote

盘点2007

文/漂之雨

距离一段冬天的记忆
寒的往来
使码头和码头之间漂浮的杂物
聚集在浪的缝隙

夜的眼睛里的腊月冰花
抑或是枝桠上的春秋
也许,黄昏前的灯光
抹长了时间的跳板

在这青黄不济的浪花中
我埋头于一段对话
并且,将这段未果的深沉
嵌入夜空
仿佛一颗颗星星的种子
萌芽于瘦黑的河床

子夜的茧磨破光滑的梦
磨破生活的绣枕
苏醒的苏州河 黑压压的水雾

擎起一条条水的裂缝
弥漫的是时间?还是
岁月挽留的 遗憾

枕着一段无可测量的距离
枕着苏州河的波涛
呓语来年的潮汐

2008-1-2
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2008-01-02 01:37:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

子夜的茧磨破光滑的梦
磨破生活的绣枕
苏醒的苏州河 黑压压的水雾

极喜欢这一段

擎起一条条水的裂缝 不太明白,是雨水吗?


枕着一段无可测量的距离
枕着苏州河的波涛
呓语来年的潮汐

后一段,你的许多诗歌里都有了~

感觉,直言了,不对多包涵~

Very Happy
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2008-01-02 03:02:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这淡淡的抒情

问好新年
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2008-01-02 16:48:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好

新年快乐!
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 10:30:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

夜的茧磨破光滑的梦
磨破生活的绣枕
苏醒的苏州河 黑压压的水雾
_________________
走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751
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