荷梦
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Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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 Posted: 2006-12-19 04:39:54 Post subject: 长相思 |
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灯凄清，
冬衾冰，
昨夜伤悲梦不成。
雨敲窗到明。
怨未平，
痴心萦，
衰草还留绿渐生。
相思何日停？ |
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kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
Posts: 2642
Location: Singapore
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| Posted: 2006-12-19 09:47:07 Post subject: |
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想不到楼主还是古文高手。。。
 
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乒乓、摄影、诗歌 |
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莹雪
进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006
Posts: 2520
Location: 中国－辽宁·三燕故都
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| Posted: 2006-12-19 16:29:38 Post subject: Re: 长相思 |
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| 荷梦 wrote: |
灯凄清，
冬衾冰，
昨夜伤悲梦不成。
雨敲窗到明。
怨未平，
痴心萦，
衰草还留绿渐生。
相思何日停？ |
语义缠绵。 |
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荷梦
进士出身
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2826
Location: 湖北，黄梅
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| Posted: 2006-12-26 02:33:51 Post subject: |
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| kokho wrote: |
想不到楼主还是古文高手。。。
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晕，我前些天回过的帖子怎么都没有了呢？
——谢谢KOKHO与莹雪评阅！ |
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张南城
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Joined: 02 Aug 2009
Posts: 145
Location: 中国安庆
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| Posted: 2009-08-16 17:47:36 Post subject: |
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好意境也。相思如雨敲窗，雨停相思不许停……
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2009-08-17 06:17:22 Post subject: |
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| 荷梦应常来古韵。 |
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