暗香如沁
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Joined: 14 Jan 2007
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Location: 北京
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 Posted: 2007-12-31 03:53:19 Post subject: 沁园春．谢师 |
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夜色微阑，月光初透，小径还凉。
借一方净土，收来云梦，半枝秃笔，敛尽花香。
任我逍遥，凭谁说甚，偷了余生论短长。
放怀笑，看如斯不羁，岂惧沧桑？
昔时背井离乡，浮萍苦、无根枉断肠。
幸恩师点化，冥顽得悟，青灯古卷，面壁慈航。
三载沉浮，行踪未定，荣辱悲欢一肩扛。
虽无剑，但优游尘世，静亦铿锵。
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白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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| Posted: 2007-12-31 05:24:28 Post subject: |
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这首写的大气.
新年快乐 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2007-12-31 09:32:26 Post subject: |
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"静亦铿镪","静"字为全词立骨,所谓"万物静观皆自得",
宁静而致远啊!问暗香节日好!
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qinghongh
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Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2007-12-31 12:06:29 Post subject: |
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| 豪气抒怀好词。暗香新年好！ |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2007-12-31 14:09:56 Post subject: |
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| 我常想，为什么暗香诗写的那么好？原来有名师指点~ |
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他乡客
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Joined: 03 Jan 2007
Posts: 487
Location: 加拿大.渥汰华 (Ottawa, Canada)
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| Posted: 2007-12-31 14:16:12 Post subject: |
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人生如遇一两位恩师贵人点拨提携，园己之愿，迷雾消散，前途明澈，实乃人生之大幸。
暗香如沁新年好！ |
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鹤影川云
童生
Joined: 13 Dec 2007
Posts: 15
Location: 贵州
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| Posted: 2007-12-31 20:00:55 Post subject: |
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真是名师出高徒啊！好诗
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暗香如沁
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Location: 北京
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