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07年最后一个了《初恋》
子花
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 19:20:26    Post subject: 07年最后一个了《初恋》 Reply with quote

换换口味 Laughing

《初恋》

光带着某种元素穿过我的身体
细胞 神经 骨头长出无数对触角
缠绕着收集力量

某种想象在夜里膨胀
抵触着黑
星子是它陨落的火花

一直小心翼翼地捡拾着
放在小屋
你有一切的光芒

十指划破了
流出的眼泪娇红

月亮很美却朦胧
没有路 一直走着
用累支持着脚步

思考和寻找

倒在月亮山顶
那是第一次的死亡
谁都别想叫醒我
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莞君
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 19:27:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的一个 欣赏了 新年问好
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山城子
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 02:02:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

朦胧!耐读!——新年快乐!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 04:49:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

好温馨, 继续睡吧 Wink
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PostPosted: 2008-01-03 18:29:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢以上三位诗人!!来者多批评,期待!!!迫切指点! Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2008-01-04 19:02:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

很美

初恋
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PostPosted: 2008-01-08 14:05:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢!今天偷闲来看看!多批评!子花感谢!新年快乐
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2008-01-11 04:01:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

初戀的滋味不太好。

白小姐特意委託我向您問好,您好啊!))))20
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