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七律--临屏观东湖梅园照有感(外一首)
楚人
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PostPosted: 2007-12-24 12:55:09    Post subject: 七律--临屏观东湖梅园照有感(外一首) Reply with quote
七律

临屏观东湖梅园照有感

多城雪虐冷寒侵,
楚苑香幽喜客歆.
老干苍虬三镇望,
新苞嫩蕊画中吟.
千枝绽放千枝爱,
万里思怀万里心.
且让离人聊寄慰,
银屏朵朵遣情深.


五绝

梅---和秋叶

傲雪雄苍野,
吟风秀俏枝.
幽魂翛万古,
素靥笑春迟.
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暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 04:51:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-28 10:57:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
暗香如沁 wrote:
欣赏。


谢暗香赏读!祝新年愉快!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 14:41:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
多城雪虐冷寒侵,
楚苑香幽喜客歆.

多城和楚苑联在了一起，好！
愿楚人兄新年再上新台阶，祝快乐！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 22:43:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
頸聯不錯，頷聯和尾聯稍弱。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 12:35:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
戴玨 wrote:
頸聯不錯，頷聯和尾聯稍弱。

谢戴玨指导!本人当勤加努力!祝新年愉快!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-30 12:46:01    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
多城雪虐冷寒侵,
楚苑香幽喜客歆.

多城和楚苑联在了一起，好！
愿楚人兄新年再上新台阶，祝快乐！

谢晓松兄鼓励,楚人定努力不辍!祝新年愉快!
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