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七绝 咏雪---和暗香
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 18:00:22    Post subject: 七绝 咏雪---和暗香 Reply with quote
七绝 咏雪---和暗香

（七绝平起首句押韵）
飘飘玉雪九天来，善舞多姿满目开。
大地春回冰化尽，香魂一缕返瑶台。

又及
（七绝仄起首句押韵）
琼玉飘飘天外来，多姿善舞素心开。
春回大地冰消尽，一缕香魂返故台。

暗香如沁原玉：七绝 咏雪二首：

1
非关情事下瑶台，猎猎风中舞步开。
白衣素心真我色，岂容天地染尘埃？


2
可恼梅魂入梦来，幽香一缕拨云开。
为君洒下多情籽，守得春分画阁栽。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 18:37:04    Post subject: Reply with quote
最喜qinghongGG的结句，婉转而不伤。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 19:25:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
最喜qinghongGG的结句，婉转而不伤。

谢莹雪MM喜欢！
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暗香如沁
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 04:34:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
好诗.学习了。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 05:54:02    Post subject: Reply with quote
好诗好和!
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 10:53:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢冰清老师暗香赏读，祝大家新年快乐！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-27 12:08:22    Post subject: Reply with quote
俺已经收藏 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 14:46:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
大地春回冰化尽，香魂一缕返瑶台。极其喜欢！
qinghongh兄新年快乐！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 16:24:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
大地春回冰化尽，香魂一缕返瑶台。极其喜欢！
qinghongh兄新年快乐！


谢晓松欣赏。祝新年快乐！
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