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我是一条无波的小河(外一首)
鬼鬼
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 00:03:40    Post subject: 我是一条无波的小河(外一首) Reply with quote

我是一条无波的小河

我是一条无波的小河
在你脚下潺潺流着
痴痴傻傻  无声无色

你是一片月光
清澈  透明  含情脉脉 影子 
印进我的心窝
我的涟漪  把你层层包裹
你飘飘的霓裳
轻拂我的忧伤我的落寞

一片枫叶忽然飘落
心一阵剧痛一阵紧缩
秋雨落花
潮湿荒凉了我整整一个季节
目光的尽头  雪又飞过
一片小小的雪花
冰冻了我的世界
我溅血的心 燃烧成一团火

我是一条无波的小河
在厚厚的冰层下静静流着
无声无色  痴痴  默默
一路眼泪  一路无声的悲歌
何处是尽头 肩扛着流浪的岁月
还有多远的路
能回到往日那奔腾的河
甘愿永远地跋涉 



打过电话之后

好久好久
没听到白云深处的那声鸟鸣了

春天了
小草已发芽
几天的寻找
借着一个一眼就能看穿的理由
鼓起天大的勇气
我仿佛一粒尘埃

依然温柔的闪电
击毁心灵的避雷针
我跌进往事的流里
雪花一样从天空轻轻飘落

空气都是陈年老醋
我身子软软的
象一条被抽去了刺的鱼
脑袋空空的
鱼儿不在水里
灵魂不在身体里
世界消失在眼前的虚无里

鱼儿把白肚皮晾在水面上
海水膨胀在鱼儿的身体里
我不知道自己是鱼还是水
思维就象发烧的大海
在风里七横八纵后
忽然成了一条平滑的浪线
束束浪花在迷幻的世界里
谢谢开开
复归于水鸟和游鱼……
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莞君
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Joined: 20 Oct 2007
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Location: 中国 陕西
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 01:51:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏了 问好
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贝多芬
童生


Joined: 17 Mar 2007
Posts: 94
Location: 中国上海
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 01:52:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

第一首意境还可以,但是后面感觉累赘了
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子花
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 14:08:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

提上!!晚上来!!
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迪拜
同进士出身


Joined: 31 Oct 2006
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 18:42:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好

抒情
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nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
Posts: 2651
Location: Madtown
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 21:01:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

已经很少看见学生似的纯情口吻,

我是一条无波的小河 。。。

所以顶一个。
这样的可爱安全可靠。
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