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《破椅子》

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-12-27 08:23:02 Post subject: 《破椅子》

《破椅子》破椅子扔在角落落满了灰尘像长满了蒿草的一台废拖拉机半夜,我听见角落里发出一声轻响好像从老父亲梦里钻出来的一句呻吟 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

白水
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Posted: 2007-12-27 10:35:06 Post subject:

自然, 形象. 很有感觉的诗歌.

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-12-27 14:23:10 Post subject:

感觉没有表达完整。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

莞君
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Posted: 2007-12-27 15:36:32 Post subject:

很好的一个欣赏了问好 _________________ 莞君

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