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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 19:31:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
好的，问妹妹好


姐姐，你也写一首，这个很好玩儿的
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 19:32:39    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
一品妹妹添红妆
三山五岳任我狂
二两醉意不算浅
五湖四海小杯装
Very Happy


一张玉脸两层妆，八院九宫心纵狂。
五步成诗六吆喝，调三斡四七分装。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 19:44:10    Post subject: Reply with quote
这数字写得很牛
向一品老师学习


胡驺一个：

七分胡来四分像
六郎五洲披洋装
凤舞九天高八斗
冰冷酒意闹丁香
Very Happy
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-19 22:29:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
一品豆腐 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
好的，问妹妹好


姐姐，你也写一首，这个很好玩儿的
好的，妹妹，那我先玩一首吧
看我的
五色祥云巧饰妆，三分虚拟意轻狂。
南腔北调歌七律，八九河开桃杏香。

这几天有事儿，下星期一再玩 Razz
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-20 17:44:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
一品是轻描淡写，力道却是十足
学习了

来一个习作：

一行白鹭出前川
两把清泪绣水帘
犹记西窗剪皓月
放下彩虹话桑棉
Very Happy


沁水银河半落川，前池文酒过云烟。
承冠欲识嫦娥面，裹梦相思复卷棉。
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:06:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:

轻拢慢捻弄竹丝，犹似小乔未嫁时。
有志男儿多努力，莫待秋后空折枝。


油过地瓜漫拔丝，蘸来白水口开时。
文轩莺对清和浊，妙舞轻回拂柳枝。
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:10:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
枫情枫月枫糖诗
半装疯来半作痴
还有一半冲霄汉
霓棠羽曲暖天池
Laughing Very Happy


上苑梅香欲待诗，引来飞雪作花痴。
自言尘解凡间事，指处垂烟障远池。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:13:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
hepingdao wrote:
强解诗梦写梦诗
一节肥肠两厢痴
春风不过雪国去
堪折梅花又几枝
Very Happy Laughing


人传无梦不成诗，有梦谁堪枉续痴？
白水门前扁舸拢，何言幽咽瑟娇枝？
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:23:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好MM节日快乐.
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:42:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
姐姐节日快乐！
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:43:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
一品豆腐 wrote:
莹雪 wrote:
好的，问妹妹好


姐姐，你也写一首，这个很好玩儿的
好的，妹妹，那我先玩一首吧
看我的
五色祥云巧饰妆，三分虚拟意轻狂。
南腔北调歌七律，八九河开桃杏香。

这几天有事儿，下星期一再玩 Razz


广座清弦着彩妆，嚼声酒令对杯狂。
临空奉此鹅毛宴，一品芙蓉豆腐香。
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一品豆腐
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:46:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
艺芳 wrote:
桃红初放两三枝,
翠柳依依弄舞痴.
独坐小亭吟暮色,
一行白鹭晚来诗.


雪压梅花有几枝？春风不过问何痴？
临窗强忍旋杯泪，不肯吟来半首诗。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 13:58:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
菊黄枫红透北极
雪峰回转冰作枝
何处揽得清娥袖
一品豆腐艺芳痴

Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 14:16:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
一品豆腐 wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
强解诗梦写梦诗
一节肥肠两厢痴
春风不过雪国去
堪折梅花又几枝
Very Happy Laughing


人传无梦不成诗，有梦谁堪枉续痴？
白水门前扁舸拢，何言幽咽瑟娇枝？


梦里赏花谁最痴
花开花谢两不知
苍苍白发起千嶂
雪雁过处暮色迟
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 14:21:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
一品豆腐 wrote:
hepingdao wrote:
一品是轻描淡写，力道却是十足
学习了

来一个习作：

一行白鹭出前川
两把清泪绣水帘
犹记西窗剪皓月
放下彩虹话桑棉
Very Happy


沁水银河半落川，前池文酒过云烟。
承冠欲识嫦娥面，裹梦相思复卷棉。


白鹭那知银河远
清泪难留卷帘烟
读破万卷犹难罢
只道书中掩红颜
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莹雪
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 14:32:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
一品豆腐 wrote:

广座清弦着彩妆，嚼声酒令对杯狂。
临空奉此鹅毛宴，一品芙蓉豆腐香。

回妹妹一首
端坐闲梳俏丽妆，轻吟酒令韵声狂。
举杯莫负倾情宴，五彩佳肴品味香。
“五彩”，指的是“五彩豆腐”。图片如下：
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PostPosted: 2007-12-26 17:32:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
莹雪 wrote:
一品豆腐 wrote:

广座清弦着彩妆，嚼声酒令对杯狂。
临空奉此鹅毛宴，一品芙蓉豆腐香。

回妹妹一首
端坐闲梳俏丽妆，轻吟酒令韵声狂。
举杯莫负倾情宴，五彩佳肴品味香。
“五彩”，指的是“五彩豆腐”。图片如下：


忽闻一品豆腐香，不禁让人胃先狂。
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 14:51:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
丢丢溪溪和袖袖，都是一品啊！

新年快乐！
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PostPosted: 2007-12-29 18:33:35    Post subject: Reply with quote
好玩儿 want to smile do it 妹妹新年快乐 thanks
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PostPosted: 2007-12-31 11:58:14    Post subject: Reply with quote
撒开追梦雪花蹄，拢耳蓬毛顺尾迟。
若是赠之遮眼罩，不知疲倦可称奇。
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